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Poll??? SEQUALNESS!!!!!!!!!

No ending this...*makes chibi eyes* PWEASE????

I hope Gohan got that through his thick skull this time, otherwis is is going to feel my wrath, lol. I wonder what will happen when the timees fes for Goten\'s puberty thing. So Vegeta has been writing memorise down? God i would say more but i\'m falling asleep at the computer and i can\'t think straight, all i have to say is that i can\'t wait till the next chap, as usual. ^_^ Ja ne! ~Passes out~ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ~~

You know it is a little lao beo be talking about the birds and the bees when the people you are suppose to be talking to about it already know the answers. Lucky Vegeta.

I smelled plot when you wrote that Radditz may have had a child somewhere, out there.

And Goku, well I am glad he has learned when enough has been said. If he didn\'t, it could very well have ended up in another fight.

Whoa there. I almost missed this. Wow. You know I can\'t figure out which chapters I love better. The one with the banging or the ones with all the emotional stuff. I\'ll admit. I am a evil genius with a heart (though you might think otherwise when you read my next chapter.) I like the emotional stuff. The scene with Goku and Chichi was so well done. *sigh* I am in awe of your ability to do stuff like that. In so little words, no less.

I\'ve been writing all day...and night...and morining. It\'s five in the morning here. One scene to go. :)

Hell yeah! I could most DEFINITELY continue reading ANOTHER 50 chapters, in addition to MoP and SE! =) Your writing is so brilliant and captivating, that even currently on vacation 3,000 miles away from home, I find I still MUST read your new chapters every week day! (*sobs* no more Saturdays! Oh well, everyone needs the weekend! =) ) However, I personally believe strongly in author\'s perogative, so if you think it should end now with SE, then it should. If not, then I will keep reading on into the third sequel just as eagerly as the first two! Cheers! Oh, yeah, and Gohan\'s still an ass.

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Another Great chatpter.

Would write more, but I\'m on a time limit.

This one is slowly winding down as well it itt it? *pout* I like it that Goku has finally come to grips and figured out how to meld both his selves. Although Goten and Trunks probably still have a ways to go. What is Vegeta writing? I guess thats the big question now. His memoirs. Those would definitely make for interesting reading but I figure its not something quite so benign. This is a review. I\'m going to review Family Therapy now and sleep. -El-

Feeling Lemony huh? Well, that\'s what you get for neglecting Family Therapy. I read the bio section and I understand (I\'m doing the same thing). I\'m not complaining, no really I\'m not. They\'re extremely nice lemons. Some people like water scenes. I personally prefer the kitchen its just such an active room with so many built in ... enhancers of the experience. -El-

Awh, now even I am content, including the fact there were no lemons. Goku\'s seeming to come to grasp with the whole situation. Vegeta\'s journal has my interest peaked though.

Somehow, I find it hard to believe the boys are actually going to find clothes to wear. I am thinking it\'s more lemons, despite the fact they are tired, or, they will go to bed naked and sleep. But that is just my imagination.

Yeah, Bulma does need to get a new social life. She\'s a fairly stimulating person, I don\'t think she could be all around haif sif she was a house mom forever.

What Goku said to Chichi about not leaving Vegeta, I am not certain if I believe that was disturbing or comforting. I found it satisfying either way.