I loved this chapter. It was so cute...even with Goten\'s bitchiness. The ink thing annoannoying thing with Goku and Vegeta was precious. (forgive es 4 in the morning when I write this) Me likes where this is going. More kitchen porn perhaps?
I actually fell asleep, I couldn\'t believe it when I woke up at 3:00 in the afternoon the next day! hehe...
I barely ever fall asleep and when I do it\'s like for 2 hours.
Anywho on with the review!!!!
Loved the last two chapters and I must agree you are feeling lemony and I am thankful!!!!!!
Woo hoo yummy lemons... Although when it switched from Vegeta/Goku to Goten/Trunks I was like NO! But little did I know a yummy lemon was awaiting my eyes.
I totally love how Goku was annoying Vegeta and how he watches the clouds and thinks of ways to annoy Vegeta...hehe that was so funny.
Thusly the hovering, hanging his head over Vegeta’s shoulder. Invading personal space and being taller with larger muscles and he was radiating just a smidge more power than Vegeta. Just to piss him off.--I loooooooved that. He is good at annoying him and that is hilarious and cute. Their relationship is great.
Vegeta: If this is teasing I will kill her. *pulls on white gloves so he is now in full “prince” mode and ready to kill *--LMAO! full Prince mode! I love it it!
I kept imagining Goku measuring the table. Like him standing there scratching the back of his table imagining Vegeta all naked--ROFL! I laughed so hard when I read that.
and I am currently working on Malicious.
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Ah, *sighs happily* Trunks is getting some after Goten told him to catch him. Yay! I am so happy Goten seemed to have a change of heart. And it was a very GOOD lemon. I think that Goten got more than he bargined for, and likes it.
I really like Saiyan Enlightenment.
Goten and Goku are so alike. It was hillarious to see both of them teasing their mates.
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I uhhh what? I uhhhh want to fuck you into the ground, do you mind? It’ll only take a minute? Oh. His father was just full of brilliant suggestions wasn’t he? Go talk tm. m. Tell him what you want to do. Right, because Trunks was so well known for his ability to talk about sex without blushing like a tomato.
-LOL Poor trunks.
“uhwhatwhat?” Goten asked, wiggled away from him, out of his grasp (which was getting progressively tighter.) He stood there, close enough not to make Trunks grab him and drag him closer again, but far enough away that he had his own ‘personal’ space. Sniffed his shirt and made a face of disgust. Pulled it up off his chest and tossed it to the ground. “You couldn’t have found some water?” -Oh dear. You shuldn\'t have done that. *snickers*
Goten was half naked. He was horny as all hells, and filled to the brim with images of his boyfriend spread out under him in every imaginable way, crying out his name and helpless to do anything but submit to the pleasure and his boyfriend was half naked. He closed his eyes, and that didn’t help any because the images just came to mind and instead of being half naked Goten was fully naked. -LOL *grins mischeviously at Goten*
“Trunks are you okay?” Concern. Wasn’t ieet eet how his boyfriend was concerned about him. Heh. *rolls eyes*
It was funny when the pen broke, geting ink all over Vegeta. *laughs*
Looking forward to more.
*growls* I know exactly what Goku was doing. *growls some more* It\'s a pet peev of mine. I think that if I had Vegeta\'s power, well, there may have been sex, but it would have been after one hell of a fight. I call it the \"Pay attention to ME!\" *growls* And I would have had to kick some serious ass. Sometimes it is cute, and then there is most of the rest of the time. Ahhhhh!
Okay, It\'ll serve him right if Vegeta puts ink marks all over his face. hehe. \"Why is your eye black Goku?\" Ah, now that woul ent entertaining.
Trunks looked disturbed—which is how most people looked when Kakarot tried to be funny. --LoL, it\'s not that disturbing...*thinks about it* well maybe it is...hehe...
Stronger men than him had tried to stop the impulse and failed. --Really? And how does he know this...hm? *is suspicious*
Gave him a smile and a wave and Vegeta shook his head and gave Kakarot a wave as he left. -- :) well isn\'t that sweet. I am glad to see Goku is begining to learn to control his violence and behavior. I was amazed, and thought for a second he may be be able to do it, but he has proven me wrong.
She tossed the burp clothe on his shoulder patted him and ran off, up the stairs gleefully squeaking all the way.--O_O! lmao..she is just happy to get a break, I know how that can feel...^_^
‘My Daddy is just a big idiot that doesn’t realize Vegeta is an evil man that uses his endless sexual charms to make people forget that he is evil and prone to murder.’--Uh...that is partially true...*points over in a dark corner* See that crumpled body over there? *sobs* that\'s Goku...Vegeta killed him!!!!! *runs off dressed in Vegeta costume, cackling like a madman*
But gosh Gohan can be ridiculous...can\'t he see by now that Vegeta doesn\'t want to murder anyone...and even I am starting to think the poor boy has a circular logic disease...
“Every aspect of my trunks?” Gohan inquired--LoL that was just too cute when Goten got up and ran to Trunks.
Videl, moron,” Trunks said, “Remember to check on youfe. fe. Remember, just had a baby? Going through shit the same as you? --WHOA! yeah!!! Go Trunks! I practically did a victory dance in my chair when I read this little speech! I was so proud. Loved it.
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