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We’ll It certainly did take me long enough now didn’t it? Now, let’s see if I can shock you even more. Gohan needs to just back off and realize that his dad is a big boy and will be living his own life and learning from his own mistakes. Of course it might be easier if he knew more about the entire saiyan bonds and mates thing. Now take your Nyquil, go back to bed and get better.

Thank you.

I had a nice long revier a r a change and when I clicked review... I lost all of my work again! *very annoyed*

*smiles* Gohan still calls him Dad. -LOL

Thank you.

I had a nice long review for a change and when I clicked review... I lost all of my work again! *very annoyed*

*follows neighbors example and chucks computer out window*

*smiles* Gohan still calls him Dad. -LOL

More often than not he found that he couldn’t sleep.--I don\'t blame him with everything that is going on and Goku isn\'t in there.

Because this man that was lying in his bed was less of the person he was becoming and painfully more of the person he had been.--It\'s like a circle to Goku, he doesn\'t want to leave that circle. But he must...sooner or later, and I fear later would be worse than sooner.

Maybe there should be meditation instead of fighting.--yeah that makes total sense

If Radditz had tried this crap he would have kneed him in the gut, --lmao! if Radditz tried that it would seem awkward to me for some reason.

There has to be something. I mean. I’m not giving you up.” Vegeta smiled--awww I love that! Of course he isn\'t giving up his Prince *snaps fingers* darn it I thought Vegeta was mine for sure that time...
I don\'t want Goku to have to give up Vegeta or his son. b/c he loves them both and I dont want anyone to hurt. I want the world to be filled with false happiness!

Aww I loved this chapter and thought it was so comforting and cute to see them holding each other while they were in bed. And the lil lemon was good too! yummy!
lmao at end notes
^.*
-MB-

Aww come on, I can just imagine it......

Gohan: How could you?

Goku: Grr! You mean how can I be gay? How can I love Vegeta? You need to grow up Gohan!

Gohan: No! How could you take Vegeta from me?!?

Goku: *sweatdrops*

Vegeta: *faints*

Ahh theres Piccolo ^_^ good to see he is where he should be. ~Nods~ And why is Vegeta gargaling afterwards? It can\'t be that bad,lol. Now, lets see, maybe Goku and Gohan could go for a walk, or a fly? Or just play a simple game of chess? ^_^ Just to get them comunicating to gto get to know eachother again. ....0_0 i just had the most weard realisation. You know Gohan wears glasses at the end of DBZ? Well i just realised that it is some corny take off from Superman...or was DBZ first?...no thats not right. Anyway he\'s the great Saiyaman and so he has classes like Clark Kent. Hahaha, i don\'t know, it just poped into my head, and i thought id tell you so that the review was longer since you where contenplating making your updates longer,lol. Well can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!

I’m glad both mothers are getting involved. And Trunks is going through angst too, poor Trunks. Both Trunks and Goku are going to have to go through that second stage where they learn control.

You’re right, Raditz never did have a son. But Vegeta does. He started off this fic being a pretty good parent. Now he’s being a little cold and callous to anything family related (at least when it concerns Goku’s family). He is going to have to find a way to make himself less hypocritical. If he wants to be with Goku he is going to have to come to terms with Goku’s family ties. He also needs to understand that the feelings he has towards his own drendren would also apply to Goku.

Here’s a question for you. How did Gohan handle his puberty? Dad was dead and Vegeta certainly wasn’t helping him out.

Wow, alot is happening.
I did for a split second feel sorry for Gohan...damn my feelings! I thought I got rid of those.

Especially after what ChiChi said...and being a mom myself..well I was liSobsSobs* poor Gohan, but still he was stupid. But I just loved how you wrote that. (what ChiChi said) that was my fave part in that chapter.

I feel sorry for almost everyone in this fic...it is so emotional.

I could hardly believe when Goku asked Vegeta to go find Gohan...I was like O_O! But I am glad nothing bad happened.
who knew it would/could be this hard for these two to have a relationship.
Yay for flying plot twists! what would I do w/out this ficcie!?

I can\'t wait to see what will happen when Goku talks to Gohan
^.*
-MB-

That was very considerate of Vegeta. Finding the fastest and most distracting way of getting those annoying thoughts out of Goku\'s head. hehe

Poor Trunks. And then, he\'s going to have a full nights sleep, so I have to think, \"Poor Goten.\" ;)

Kakarott with insomnia? Pity party anyone? *rolls eyes*

Gohan is a prick. Vegeta sucked some dick.
And now his teeth he brushes so he wont get sick?

LOL