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* cough... Cough... cough.* Not quite so heavy on the sanitizer Ok? I promise to try tep mep my particles to myself. (although the damage has already been done. I\'ve corrupted another one. *evil Lisa grin*)

And Vegeta finds himself in a situation that he doesn\'t quite know how to handle (Gohan thanked him). And Gohan is right. He doesn\'t know the man who is inhabiting his father\'s body anymore. And that\'s the fault of both Gohan and Kakarrot; Gohan for causing the rift and Kakarrot for letting it go that far. I\'m supprised that Gohan is calling him Goku instead of Kakarrot in place of Dad.

As I implied earilier I don\'t envy the mess you\'ve gotten yourself into but I\'m looking forward to seeing how you fix it.

-El-

Wow. Gohan actually thanked Vegeta.

LOL at end notes.

Well hopefully Goku\'s little talk, or lack of since Chi-Chi did all the talking, with ChiChi will help him sort things out. I don\'t really care if Gohan dies at the moment but i do carout out Goku\'s health so i really think things should be put right now. Where is Piccolo when you need him? I\'m sure he could help Goten sort Gohan\'s head out. Plus i wanna see more pale/blushing green things, loln\'tn\'t wait till the next chap, I CAN\'T BELEVE YOU DIDNT UPDATE ON SATURDAY!!! 0_0 Did something bad happen that ment you couldent? Or did you just not feel well enough? ~Pats ur head~ Poor thing, i would help if i could. ~Looks at how long review is~ ^_^; longest review for this story i\'ve ever done...must be the fact that it\'s been a couple of days, who knows. Gotta go, Ja ne! ^_^

Well, if the sayians say that there wasn\'t even a hint of a smell of lemons, I am going to have to believe them, because their scense of smell is much better than mine.

I realize that Goku has much to go through on his way to finding his sayain self. I am glad Vegeta showed as much patience as he did, Lord knows I want Goku to make it simple also.

Those were very good words of advice from Chi Chi.

LOL at the \"having a thing for small angry types.\" that FUNNFUNNY.

Looky! New email!
I decided to steal time away from rebuilding my site to catch up on my reading... Card Fic #1 now checked off the list! About time Gohan got his butt kicked - but I was surprsed that Trunks was the start of it. I complete go with the interference with the \'submissive\' approach but I was still caught off guard that it started there. *rubs Goku\'s back* he\'ll get over this soon won\'t he?

Now for the next fic...

::big anime-style puppy-dog eyes looking hopeful:: Is Gohan still gonna die? I mean, that\'s pretty much the only interesting thing he does, other than screw Vegeta.
Vegeta: ::sweatdrops:: Where the hell did that come from?
Sarky: Thought you knew honey, everyone fucks you.
Vegeta: WHY?
Sarky: Well, maybe because they have EYES and they can see how sexy you are. Oh, and they have brains....
Vegeta: Gohan doesn\'t have a brain, or haven\'t you beayinaying attention?
Sarky: Damn.
Vegeta: Kakarrot hasn\'t got a brain either....
Sarky: Shut up.
Vegeta: Or Goten...
Sarky: Shut up!
Vegeta: Oh, so you want some nice Vegeta/Bulma? Maybe some fluff?
Sarky: Gah! ::whistles. Gohan shows up::
Gohan: Problem?
Sarky: Screw Vegeta. Now. He\'s getting all tense \'cos he hasn\'t been allowed any sex in this chapter.
Gohan: Ok. ::slings Vegeta over shoulder and walks off::

Still prefer him to die though.......

Well that chapter was a little angsty, wasn\'t it.

So, you can pass this info onto Goku if you want to, or not. Either way. He can\'t actually pass-him-self-out-to-death. As soon as he passes out, his involutary muscels will kick in and start working by themselves.

*Shrugs* Like I said before, you can devulge this information or not, as you choose.

Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter.

Uh, I stilrongrongly, strongly dislike Gohan. Pity for him, uh, nope, sorry, not a drop from me. Maybe it\'s because the baka cares so damn much about that bloody dead harpy\'s feelings and not a twinkling about Goku\'s. But to call your sire by their first name! He deserved the \"spanking\" Goku finally dealt his mama\'s boy\'s ass. Poor, poor Goku does NOT deserve this heartbreak! Where\'s Vegeta? Arg! =(

Um... Uh... Hmmm... Am I allyally starting to rub off? *Grabs head in pain and writhes around on ground*