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for Saiyan Enlightenment

by CardDragonBall

person jaygoose
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gaps* I don\'t know what to say. Poor...*fights urge to be sincere* Go...han. *sighs in defeat* He is a fucked up little bastard isn\'t he. *runs away crying and shouts* Poor Goku! Poor Gohan!
person SaiyajinNeko
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To much angst, i can\'t take it. Goku is having a nerviose break down, Gohan is screwed up still, and Goten feels bad for him. Damn. I just wish Gohan could acsept Goku and Vegeta\'s relationship, they love eachother and maybe if Gohan could see that then he might try and acsept them and then everyone can be happy. But alas it is too much to ask for, isent it? ;_; I am sad.
person Webtester01
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Angst. Angst. Angst.

Looks like Gohan and Goku are in the angst boat now.

I partially pity Gohan now that we got a look in that pea brain of his.

It seems to me that Goku and Gohan have been feeling the same about
the current events. Gohan has felt lost, and has been a jerk about it because
he didn\'t know who to turn to. Goku has Vegeta; Goten has Trunks; Gohan has...?

That is my interpretation. Correct me if I am wrong.

Loved the chapter. Must have more! *Sits at desk, stares at computer, and taps fingers.*
person macha
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty ballsey of Vegeta, to get the others\' attention, and then kiss Goten. I don\'t think that I would have thought about doing it. And if I had thought about doing it, actually going thr wit with the idea.

So, I wonder what is really going on in Gohan\'s head at the moment? And I am glad that everyone, yes even Gohan, were alright. Sorry about those ppl houses though.
person Plyric
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh YES! Go Goku and Trunks! Yeah! Beat the shit out of that completely stupid, idiotic, half-assed moron! YEAH!

Oh, um, yeah, I guess the moron has to live, right? But, can can we beat the bloody pulp out of him, anyway?

Wow! Goku just jumped into a fight without asking, \"Hey, Gohan, why\'d you kick your brother in the head?\" Just jumped right in. YES! I love that Saiyan side!

MORE! MORE!
person EleneK
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Hate the Server here on AFF. It never lets me review. I haven\'t abandoned your fics I promise. My reviews. just. never. go. through. Anywho....

Ok that was an interesting end. Even if Trunks still has a messed up view of what happened. Gohan walked in on a situation that looked much worse than it was (like Trunks was trying to get Goten to do something he didn\'t want to), he tries to protect his little brother and gets beaten up for it. Trunks doesn\'t realize what it looked like to the older boy so I can understand why he is a little mad. Even Goten, who was the only person who understood the intent of all parties involved is mad at his brother? I\'m confused. I bothers me that not even Vegeta took the time to figure out what was happening and just jumped to the conclusion that Gohan was threatening Goten. I\'m still looking forward to Kakarrot\'s reaction in the next chapter when he realizes how badly he overreacted. Have fun straightening this out.
person jose�ose
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was so sad. Gohan said that Goku wasn\'t his father anymore. It is true though isn\'t it.
person Webtester01
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gohan is such a jerk!

Aff keeps giving me line 11 errors. *shakes fist at computer*

So I will keep this short. Looking forward to more.
person SaiyajinNeko
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0_0 Gohan...what is going through that mans head? He needs to take a looooong look around him cos if he dosent he wont have anything left. I wanna know what is going on with Goku and Vegeta, is Goku really angry? Or upset? I wanna hug him ;_; poor Goku-san. ^_^ And i will keep pushing as long as i feel it is needed, lol. I do it for the good of the people. Hehe, can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
person jaygoose
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. Gohan is going to die. Poor stupid prejudice ass clown. I love how you began the chapter with the fight and then turned around and explained how it happened. That was really good.

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