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June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting interesting. update soon.
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEHE, I\'m so happy I got a look on the others\' reviews to this story! The Chichi Slaughter House\'s accusation made me look for this site she called \"Saiyan Hideaway\"... and there I found more chapters of this story!
YAY!
I simply LOVED the way Vegeta fainted at Bulma\'s feet when Kakkarot was brought back to life... ^_^
Hope you finish this story on either site... If Digital Illustration\'s still giving you a hard time, then perhaps you can ask your co-writer L\'Orne to keep on going with this story for a while? PLE-ASE??
I just HAVE to know what happens! *WHINE*
*So you\'re \"A\'Nore\" a.k.a \"Alfarrar\" a.k.a \"immatureimp\"... all the same person.
Jeez, you sure changed your name A LOT. Perhaps you\'d wanna state it in your summary so people stop insinuating you stole this story from Alfarrar/A\'Nore... Like, putting \"(Changed my pen name)\" or something.*
YAY!
I simply LOVED the way Vegeta fainted at Bulma\'s feet when Kakkarot was brought back to life... ^_^
Hope you finish this story on either site... If Digital Illustration\'s still giving you a hard time, then perhaps you can ask your co-writer L\'Orne to keep on going with this story for a while? PLE-ASE??
I just HAVE to know what happens! *WHINE*
*So you\'re \"A\'Nore\" a.k.a \"Alfarrar\" a.k.a \"immatureimp\"... all the same person.
Jeez, you sure changed your name A LOT. Perhaps you\'d wanna state it in your summary so people stop insinuating you stole this story from Alfarrar/A\'Nore... Like, putting \"(Changed my pen name)\" or something.*
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Big glowing eyes::
I can\'t wait till\' you update... I really sincerely love your stories babe. They\'re so... I\'d say unique is the best word. And while they contain love, they aren\'t COMPLETELY revolved around it. Your characters have balls is what I mean to say. They aren\'t \"Sniff* Oh Trunksy, please just hold me in your big tight strong arms while I cry for no apparent reason at all\"..
They have REAL HUMAN emotions! They feel detachment, numbness, anger.. they FEEL strongly but it doesn\'t always mean that they have to break down in one big pitiful sobbing mess to express it. Sometimes, the greatest thing about your writing, is that you DON\'T have the characters act like drama queens.. that way, the reader looks further into it, watching for just the most subtle detail to let us know what the character is feeling.
And your character\'s thoughts are so personable, and though I\'m more addressing the stories as a whole, even in this fic, the differences in personalities is mind boggling. You have two Vegeta\'s... TWO VEGETAS! (oh, but if there world were only so lucky) and you STILL make them seperate characters, with very distinct, trademark feelings and thoughts.... they\'re the same man but you really express just how unique they are due to background differences.
Excellent... I really REALLY hope that you find the inspiration and the muses to keep on writing because I\'ve now officially read every one of your DBZ stories that you have posted and am waiting for updates on all of them. I love how you write and if you would believe it, I literally stayed up until 9 this MORNING, reading and drooling over every chapter of your stories. Please don\'t see this as blind flattery, (as sometimes is the tendency to do when met with praise) but know that I am 100 percent sincere... I really cannot wait to read more.
Camaro
I can\'t wait till\' you update... I really sincerely love your stories babe. They\'re so... I\'d say unique is the best word. And while they contain love, they aren\'t COMPLETELY revolved around it. Your characters have balls is what I mean to say. They aren\'t \"Sniff* Oh Trunksy, please just hold me in your big tight strong arms while I cry for no apparent reason at all\"..
They have REAL HUMAN emotions! They feel detachment, numbness, anger.. they FEEL strongly but it doesn\'t always mean that they have to break down in one big pitiful sobbing mess to express it. Sometimes, the greatest thing about your writing, is that you DON\'T have the characters act like drama queens.. that way, the reader looks further into it, watching for just the most subtle detail to let us know what the character is feeling.
And your character\'s thoughts are so personable, and though I\'m more addressing the stories as a whole, even in this fic, the differences in personalities is mind boggling. You have two Vegeta\'s... TWO VEGETAS! (oh, but if there world were only so lucky) and you STILL make them seperate characters, with very distinct, trademark feelings and thoughts.... they\'re the same man but you really express just how unique they are due to background differences.
Excellent... I really REALLY hope that you find the inspiration and the muses to keep on writing because I\'ve now officially read every one of your DBZ stories that you have posted and am waiting for updates on all of them. I love how you write and if you would believe it, I literally stayed up until 9 this MORNING, reading and drooling over every chapter of your stories. Please don\'t see this as blind flattery, (as sometimes is the tendency to do when met with praise) but know that I am 100 percent sincere... I really cannot wait to read more.
Camaro
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading strating to read this sotry a while back but u stopped updating for a while. Not sure when u started again but I\'m glad, I just love V+G yaoi, it\'s the best, and this story is cool too. Update soon please
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please update this ASAP!
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ach no! The suspense is killing me! You must update! I am simply dying to know what happens next!
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have always loved this fic, ever since I found it at Hideaway. I love the emotion that you so easily protrey, you are truly a great author and I can\'t wait to find out what happens next (did you update hideaway too?)
Love ya!
Vegeta\'s Mate
Love ya!
Vegeta\'s Mate
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG UPDATE!!! LOL
SOOOOON! <3
SOOOOON! <3
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wasn\'t this fic posted once upon a time, long, long ago on fanfiction.net? Either way, I remember a lot more than 3 chapters! I found 5 chapters of this fic posted on http://www.anzwers.net/hot/hideaway/Fics/Other4/F_Caught.html , but I had thought I read 6 or 7 chapters of it? Either way, I have been waiting for the end to this very excellent story for a LONG LONG LONG LONG LONG LONG LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG time!!! I can\'t wait for you to update! =)
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the chapter the flashback was cool.