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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, wow I loved your fanfiction its such a sham you stopped writting!!!!!!!! I hope you update again, and that you haven\'t stopped because of what that other person said in their review about your grammer! I thought it was fine, and didn\'t even notice. But I must admit I\'m not good at grammer at all hehe ^_^ but even if I was it didn\'t bother me because the story was so great! so I really hope you keep posting! I want to know what happens next!!!!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I have to ask, but where are you from? Your fic is written in english but sentence structures are awkward and disorganized, your grammar is off at times and I unfortunately couldn\'t bring myself to finish reading the rest of your fic because these faults. I would suggest though, that in the future you have your work beta-read before posting it.