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by tinyvoice

person Dream_Megami
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I just wanted to tell you I think your fic is awesome so far. I also read the one you got the idea from on Fanfiction.net and I really like your interpretation of the characters and the scenario. Keep up the good work.
person Icz
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, though a die-hard 3x4 fan I\'m was happy to see Wufei and Quatre hook up.

For what it\'s worth I\'d rather have Quatre stay with Wufei, I mean Trowa didn\'t give h sec second look till Wufei boinked him, he missed out, tough shit.

person Maldoror
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this. The language is rich and delightful, and the characters are layered, even though there\'s only two chapters so far. Quatre\'s reaction was very believable for the character you crafted. There were some very funny moments as well, mainly due to the phrasing (\'Quatre seemed to have a vague understanding of ito, so, since he didn\'t ask what the hell Wufei was doing with the lip balm; though, he did have the coy charm to blush.\', phrases like that, neat little packages that catch the reader offguard and make him/her grin)...

Anyway, I do hope you continue this. I\'ll keep an eye out for it!
person dragonkitty
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHHH I like it, and i can\'t wait t see more of it.
person Nozomi
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
don\'t retire it! this is good! I like what you\'ve got so far, please continue!
person bishigurl345
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice start!! * waves 4x5x4 flag* I love stories that involve Wufei, Trowa, and Quatre....please please please please please make this a 3x4x5 YUMMINESS FOR ALL ^_^

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