rate_review Reviews

no!!!! you can\'t stop there!!!!!!!!

Okay. First of all, it\'s a good story with a pretty good plot line to it. I\'m liking it so far. The only thing is I don\'t think you have a clue of what subject you\'re writing about. I mean with Duo cutting himself. I could be wrong, but it seems to me like you don\'t know what the act is at all. Sure, it seems simple, it\'s just cutting one\'s arms. Right? No. Like I said, I could be very wrong, you may know of what you\'re talking about here. Other than that, you\'re doing a marvelous job. I can\'t wait for chapter 5 ^^; (Sorry if I came off rude here. It\'s not meant to sound rude at all, okay? I\'m just a little curious, is all).