rate_review Reviews

That was really cute. You did a good job at keeping Piccolo in character.

I remember coming across this story a while back and thought it was a bit strange but well written and very entertaining. I've stumbled upon it again and realized it's well-written, entertaining and hot. Old story but such an original idea and very unique. I still love it. There should be a sequel where Piccolo discovers a strap-on..

I love your take on this story, Piccolo was very in character and I love the way he is very attentive to Chichi as well, like brushing the leaves out of her hair and helping her dress ^^

THis is the weirdest story I've ever read I think. It's sooo odd....but sympathetically written.

Honestly, I don't resent chichi for "cheating" on goku at all. In fact, I kind of feel bad for her because it seems like Goku doesn't even care enough for her to get jealous.

Sometimes, I really don't get Goku. It's a bit sad (for chichi) that an asexual being (piccolo) would've made a better husband than goku.

I wasn't going to read this fic but the number of reviews and the quality of reviews intrigued me enough to check it out.

All in all, it was a very well-written fic and pretty believable, even though I find the plot very sad for poor chichi.

I usually really hate Piccolo/Chichi, but this is really done well. I love that you kept Piccolo asexual (the whole 'asexual but, ZOMG, he has a fuctioning penis just by coincidence' annoys the crap out of me most of the time.), and all of the characters in-character. Well done :)

This is an excellent story - I've loved it for a while now, but only recently remembered where I read it. ^^ I love your complicated take on what is, by its very nature, a complicated situation. I've never seen this topic handled in this way before - props to you for originality. Your ability to stay in voice was impressive, too - it all sounded like Piccolo.

Very good description. You caught Piccolo's personality well. If I was still in middleschool, I would have wished it was me..I rememeber having a huge crush on Piccolo. Great story! There aren't enough piccolo lemon stories!

This is absolutely the most intelligent lemon I have -ever- read. And in character!! Sweet hell, it was really quite interesting in and of it's own, it was well written and I must admit you absolutely floored me. I loved this, as a story. It's interesting, it does make sense, and just damn. I love how you voiced Pic... it sounded like him. And in a lemon, for god's sake- that never happens! I'm so completely impressed with this. Have you written anything else? I'd love to see it.

About fucking time I see a het fic with piccolo in it. That deserves a 10 out of 10 just for that. Very creative, this story is.

To pixelgoddess, go suck a dick you fag lovin dyke bitch.

^_^ Great fic. I luved it, and you did a really good job of writing Piccolo\'s character too. Too bad Piccolo didn\'t get more \'involved\' with Chichi though . . .