rate_review Reviews

very good. you did well with the time line. wtg piccolo ;)

*Sweatdrops*
Classic Goku.....
I feel torn Poor Piccolo he gets caught up in what is going to become a rather tragic affair.

Very good. My obvious bias aside, this is the most believable pairing I\'ve seen in the Dragonball universe. I\'m also impressed tat you wrote the whole story from Piccolo\'s viewpoint and kept it very much in character; a huge plus as he\'s my favourite character. And of course, keeping the whole thing funny too.

I also liked little tidbits like Piccolo being able to reabsorb his claws, absorbing water and Vegita being the heavy hand of the family.

I guess the only thing I have to quibble about was the reason for the turn around on Chichi\'s part when he said he\'d die before he\'d let anything happen to Gohan? It seemed some what sudden to, and maybe for this reason, but it\'s equally an enigma for male readers as it was for Piccolo.

That aside, a very good one shot lemon.

I haven\'t given a review in a serious lapse of time. Nice to read a Piccolo fanficcie once and a while. Just a shame that there are not as much as I hoped there will be.

Honestly, I have just been browsing around the fanficcies and even during the searches. Seen your work several times, and well yes just moved on. Haven\'t decided what I have liked more for a Piccolo fic and well forbidden pairs usually grasp me.

I expected this fic to be one of those one-shots and semi-hardcore. Though turns out I was far from that. First story that I read that Piccolo had no male reproductive organs. Was a HUGE shocker, though I continued to read. I admire you for keeping the loving peace in the story, also keeping Piccolo as himself. Was very astonished that you did not let anger get to either Goku or Gohan. I encourage you to continue as do your other fans. If you write any more forbidden pairings, you can always e-mail me for the scoop and/or update.

Well, I hope this helps you in your confidence of writing as it helped me to continue my own fanfictions, fanmanga, and probably my future anime. Thank you for writing this story! ^^

Your fan,
Angel Lymisty

O.k. that was a really...cute story, I ended up giggling through most of it....I can imagine the look on Piccolo's face asking Kami-sama for help...*laughs hysterically* It's great for a laugh, after reading Finale I decided to see what else you wrote and I'm glad I did, I enjoyed that story, when do you intend to update?

This was so well done. You get a 10 for creativity. Excellent work!

ha ha, this story\'s hilarious. it\'s written really well. an impossible situation, but you made it believable. you kept piccolo in character.

Wow that was really forkin good. I can\'t stand Chichi but you wrote out the fic so well. I\'m bummed it was a one shot but if you went more into it you\'d have to deal with GT stuff. And lord knows Chichi would be miffed about Goku bein a kid ^^;;. Keep up thhe excellent work.

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Brilliant!

To be honest I\'ve never read a fic like this before, and now I feele I\e I\'ve been missing out entirely. This sounded like a one-shot to me, but I encourage to wto write more, whatever the story line or pairing. You\'re writing--damn--is wonul aul and top-knotch. After I\'m done writing this review I\'m going to check out whatelse you may have written, and I think this is going in one of my \'fav\' stories lists, the first actually.

I loved the way you portrayed Piccolo, it\'s so rare to him him shed in such a powerful and serious light. I cannot rain enough praises on you. Very very good job!

Well... I was prepared not to like this. I mean, really. The idea of Piccolo and Chichi is just too squicky for words. But you handled it well. Chichi was presented sympathically, which is fairly unusual. Goku was his normal clueless self. Piccolo was the responsible one. He defined his duty and performed it. You present him as consistently loyal and non-judgemental. This isn\'t turning me into a het-fan *g* - I\'m a hardcore Vegeta/Goku believer - but this was a nice change of pace.