rate_review Reviews

It's a great story. The only thing I'll say is that the randomly placed Japanese word here and there kept throwing me off. I think it would be better to make a whole sentence Japanese rather than just a word or two because no one talks like that. XD It just screams Otaku. Most of the words, while a correct direct translation, are not used in the right context. Aside from that the story is great and I found it enjoyable.

Please continue this fic! Please add a new chapter soon!

*pouts* You know, I read this fic as you wrote it a couple years ago, and many times you thanked your readers for their loyalty and reviews... Well, I kinda feel like you just abandoned all those people who supported you and enjoyed your fics.

I know what it's like to lose interest in something, but I've always finished a fic to the best of my ability to make sure all those loyal readers got what they deserved.

I continue to check back every now and then with the hopes you'll pick this fic back up, but I'm always disappointed. I hope maybe you'll follow through and finish up, and show everyone just how much you appreciated their loyalty; because right now, you've pretty much shown all those people who cared enough to support your work that you don't care enough about them to finish the fic they all enjoyed so much.

You will finish it and you will like it...that about all I have to say. love the story alot. and i really want to read the rest but if you don\'t want to continue it that\'s okay i\'ll just cry out my sadness alone in my bed while i die of heart break. continue. ^_^ BTW KILL THAT SON OF A BITCH CHICHI BEFORE I DO. lol have fun

great story great story update soon

This is a great fic. I wish you would finish it! If you do come and do that many readers would be very happy!!!!

Very well done however, spelling leaves much to be desired. I will take a look at your other stories! Keep up the good work!

I loved it cant wait for u to write more. Please do!!! :)

I really love this story. I really like the fact that Vegeta is not the abusive or violent person that he is often made out to be. I really despise ChiChi now. I never really liked her and now I see that she is a total bitch. I hope she comes to an extremely violent and *slow* death. And oh yea...please update soon!

omfg dude you HAVE to update this fic...
if you dont i will surely cry my eyes out!
this si so emotional!! and so sweet!
i absolutely LOVE it. please update!