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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I pray to every God that ChiCHi is not found by Vegeta, Gohan, or Trunks. SHe is one dead bitch when and if she is!!! She did the right thing getting the hell outta there. This chapter was phenomenal...please please add more soon!! Goku I hope you get well sweetie....
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:sniffle: :sniffle: Pg, I think I\'m gonna cry.
That was an amazing chapter.
You know how I feel about your work in general.
This was one of the best chapters I have read in any of your stories.
You nailed emotions perfectly, Gohan storming up to defend his mother’s honor.
I could see him doing that. I love this.
~*IVY*~
That was an amazing chapter.
You know how I feel about your work in general.
This was one of the best chapters I have read in any of your stories.
You nailed emotions perfectly, Gohan storming up to defend his mother’s honor.
I could see him doing that. I love this.
~*IVY*~
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I usually don\'t like fics bashing Chichi because they mostly don\'t have any good reason to, but this time
I am very pleased because it is done for the story. Very interesting, very sad. Good writting style as well.
All around great stuff. Looking forward for the rest of it.
I am very pleased because it is done for the story. Very interesting, very sad. Good writting style as well.
All around great stuff. Looking forward for the rest of it.
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May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Do more quilky this is a really cool storie!
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April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh very good! update soon!
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April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow that was powerful and I can\'t wait to see more please up date soon
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April 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story just gets better and better. I hope you will continue updating soon cause its really god and i\'d like to see how it ends. Anyway great job and keep it up. :)
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April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O_O;;; he\'s not dead is he? PLEASE YOU HAVE TO TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*wiping eyes* I am so glad Goku is away from that ChiCHi bitch! sh Vsh Vegeta would have killed her... rape is a coward\'s way of control. Vegeta did the right thing by breaking her wrist...he should\'ve broken her ass!! Please update soon..this story gets better every chapter!
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April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hurry and do more this is really a good story!