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Very interesting

This is so beautiful! Oh, I love it! Please write more!

Well, these last two chapters are full of both of them searching out their motives and and emotions. You went into great depth about both. It still is interesting from Vegeta's POV, the way he is interperating what Goku is going through. I would guess by the hunting that Goku still hasn't recovered fully from his earlier display in his home.

I am glad Chichi is going to be alright.

I also like the way the lime faded into thoughts/feelings/hopes. Very nicely done and tactful.

This is the fic you wanted a little Reese help with eh? I\'m be proudhelphelp you with the certain scense. And i\'m saying this without giving anything away *smirks* you\'re lucky! But whenever i see you i\'ll tell you in case you don\'t see this for awhile! Byebye for now and i\'m gonna be gone all weekend *sobs* but i\'ll be back on Monday. Have a great 4th of July!
Robin

I really am liking how this is coming along.
Very, vedescdescriptive and well written. You are good at capturing emotions and personalities.
I do hope this is a G/V ficcie....but I suppose I will have to wait and see.
I find Goku very interesting in this fic and Vegeta\'s character is well written.
Keep up the awesome work and I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

^.*
-MB-

Great story so far. The following paragraph from your story I find humorous and I agree with it:

I nodded. I knew what he spoke of. Humans are so caught up in education, higher learning that they can not see the miracles of others, the greater things. They can not see the glories that others behold unless they have a degree, a piece of paper, with a name, a simple name, from a place, a building on it. Humans believe that they are better than those who do not have these meaningless pieces of paper. This belief has gone so far and has become so strong that those without it will lie, will forge, will cheat just to achieve a greatness. This greatness. A greatness of a piece of paper, made from a tree, a living thing, that has spent hundreds of years growing, just to be cut down and handed to a person. All for the jaded misconception of greatness.

Keep up the good work.

Vegeta\'s being very philosophical. ::frowns at Vegeta::
Vegeta: \'What?\'
Sarky: \'Less talk, more fuck.\'
Vegeta: ::sweatdrops:: \'But you don\'t even know me and Kakarrot are going to be together yet!\'
Sarky: ::pulls out riding crop:: \'It\'s him or me, honey...\'

*smirks* thank you for killing her off first! She needed her head bashed into pieces... i almost feel bad for her... she always gets killed *sees her screaming at GokU* ohkay.. she needs to be killed right away. that bitch... i don\'t like her but you may know that.
It was wonderful. I did read most of this on your LJ but i\'m hardly in the mood to read anything anymore. Kakkarot is back eh? this can prove interesting. but.. i will be sad if this is a Goku/Vegat fic... i don\'t like those- but you can do what you want. *frowns* i always get uke and seme confused. @.@ my memory lately has been zip. I usta know thou. heheh that\'s what i get for never reading fics anymore. Got a lot of free time right now.
Awe... i didn\'t see you yesterday. i was so sad- b was was feeling really crappy so i left wen went to bed. Still feel the same.. *shakes fist then takes anti-germ spray from belt and sparys eveything around me* HA! Eat that germs! *coughs* i guess it didn\'t work.. *sprays brother* yeah! *then sparys you just in case* byebye for now.. i hope to speak with you soon byebye!

Agent -182-

I really liked this so far.
I am hoping for a G/V pairing but then again that is what I lwaylways hoping for. ^_^
But it was really well described you captured the emotions beautifully and the openeing paragraphs were great.
And I do hope you continue this.
Just loved how you described faces, beauty, ugliness...really good.

I have never done anything to be beautiful--I loved that line...very powerful. I have never done anything to be beaul..bl..but yet he just did...he saved ChiChi\'s life.

Excellent fic...

^.*
-MB-

This is good, I like that Vegeta just completely changed his opinion on Goku. But why would Goku act so violent if it\'s not saiyan instinct? I\'d be interested in finding out.