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for Atonement

by KalikaMaxwell

person DarkHabit
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! I finally found a fic where Al is still in the armor. I\'ve just been wondering how someone would make the whole, sex with a suit of armor thing, work. Your way was logical I have to admit, though it did make me giggle when I first read it. Great story, and congratulations, you\'ve setteled my curiosity, feel honored! ^^

~DH
person Metranome
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure if I\'ve reviewed this before, since I\'ve read it twice. Anyway, it\'s good, and Ed and Al are the most in character I\'ve ever seen them in an Elricest fic. I hope you write more stuff this sad yet sweet in the future. Maybe a little more sweet than sad, next time. :)
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww......that was so sweet! ^^ Kinky, original, and angsty, to say the least, but still sweet. I really liked it! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
person Miko Hanyou
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it,there\'s not any much pairing of ed and is ARMORED brother getting together.i give 10 out of 10 rating
person Aloe
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is well written & captures the characters nicely. A bit too nicely, actually. (Shudders a bit and wanders off to see if you\'ve written anything else)
person reinhartvonlohengramm
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My eyes! My eyes! AHHHHHHHHHHH! Well done naughty stuff (okay i can see again .)!!
person twisteds_mini
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe later you could do a sequel to this where Al turns back into human? ^^;; Maybe? This was very sweet though- I luff it!
person RaveEchidan
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow there is little more i can say about it, compleetly amazing and so sad.....it really was perfection.
person ThirdEye
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Normally I don\'t enjoy pain fics, but this was too beautiful not to like. It was so interesting too! Creative little concept you have there. ^_^
person Madame Malfoys Mirror
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello Kalika,

Just wanted to say that I really liked this fic. The characterization is just excellent, especially Ed\'s ... (since I\'m an obsessive fangirl when it comes to the pint-sized alchemist) but I was also very pleased with Al\'s. He\'s so deeply loving and giving. The sex part of it made me cringe a little (because OW, metal and flesh) but it was a well-paced, compelling read.

Good work.

Madame

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