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March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would like to read more. Are there more chapters coming?
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Intense chapter. I hope you continue soon.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, awesome story so far. I know it's been awhile, but I hope you plan to continue this... It's too good to leave unfinished.
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it you should continue i never read one like this
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff*..i dunno what happens next
umm the massacre thing...did trunks just kill a couple workers for fun?
it was good not bad
umm the massacre thing...did trunks just kill a couple workers for fun?
it was good not bad
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I say, write more *now*. It\'s not that bad.
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gosh i\'m a slacker- and i have to say this. It\'s magnificent. I was enthralled with it the whole time. Beautiful, really.It jumped around a bit but i ustoostood it.. dang you for making my eyes watery. A Goku fic *grins* we need more of these! I cannot wait until you update this fic is truly great.
Agent -182-
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SO intense! Truly, WOW! I\'m eagerly awaiting the next installment. I pity Goku because I know he did something he thought was responsible at the time. He really didn\'t have much of a choice. But, I understand from his family\'s point of view on how they can perceive things differently. After all, Goku wasn\'t there to give the proper answers to their accusations. It\'s sad, knowing his own children have turned against them. I understand their reasons. Though, I pray that perhaps they will eventually see that Goku had meant no harm in what he had done. They have to realize that his priorities in life are very different from what is considered normal.
I could talk all about this forever, but I\'d rather wait to see how this tale unfolds. You\'ve left me feeling intrigued by this; it\'s very different from many of the fics I\'ve read in the past. Yes, you have become yet another one of my stalking victims. *sporks you*
I could talk all about this forever, but I\'d rather wait to see how this tale unfolds. You\'ve left me feeling intrigued by this; it\'s very different from many of the fics I\'ve read in the past. Yes, you have become yet another one of my stalking victims. *sporks you*
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very promising beginning! I can\'t wait to read more and find answers to all the questions that arose.
I really liked the way you used the flash backs and built up an tense-angsty atmosphere! Great!
I really liked the way you used the flash backs and built up an tense-angsty atmosphere! Great!
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! I wanna know more! *bites fingernails *
Poor Goku. Fifty years and he didn\'t know it. Definitely want to know what\'s up with Trunks and Vegeta and the massacre. What happened with Goten and his mom. *shudder * or maybe not. But I love Goten! Besides Goten and Trunks he\'s my favorite. *notices people looking at her blinking * Oh, and er...Vegeta too. I love him.
... ... ... Just remember, work is not nearly as important as writing. *holds up stopwatch and swings it back and forth * You will write more. You will write more! More! More!
~Card!~
Poor Goku. Fifty years and he didn\'t know it. Definitely want to know what\'s up with Trunks and Vegeta and the massacre. What happened with Goten and his mom. *shudder * or maybe not. But I love Goten! Besides Goten and Trunks he\'s my favorite. *notices people looking at her blinking * Oh, and er...Vegeta too. I love him.
... ... ... Just remember, work is not nearly as important as writing. *holds up stopwatch and swings it back and forth * You will write more. You will write more! More! More!
~Card!~