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for I Made You a Snack

by Anatra

schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it! please update! (even though your last was like ...'04...but PLEASE!)
person casual thinker
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know I\'ve been thinking about it and if Trunks carrys out the plan an tries to be the dom ..I think Goten would leave him... I mean the way you wrote him you said multiple times that Goten hates his status as the dominate one challanged...
person Rchan
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I can\'t wait for more!! This is some great stuff!!! Please add more soon!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shi
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
waii ^^ continue PLEASE! want to read about the pet-rebellion :p
I absolutely love your story so far! i had so much fun reading it and the father-son thing gives the whole ff a nice touch hehe
please please update soon : )
shi

schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Great fic, I can see why it was banned, they ban anything that's any good.
Can't wait for a new chapter!
person Yoshiru
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM


You have to write more!! PLEASE???? *begging* I\'ll do anything!!!! *still begging........ and continues begging* ~_^ PRETTY PLEASE? I loved it SO much, It is one of the best fics that I have read!! ^.^ GREAT JOB!
person lunarsfire
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I can\'t wait to see what revenge the subs have planned.
person MonkeyGurL
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story, I can\'t wait to see the whole revenge thing that Goku planned. Vegeta really needs a reminder of who is the most powerful saiya the the universe, right? :)
It\'s so cool that you usually update really fast and the chapters are actually long and very entertaining.

Can\'t wait for your next update.
person MonkeyGurL
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I review seeing as this is the first stI haI have read from this site. I find this story incredible, I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. I am hoping for a quick update, Please :)

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