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i love it!!! i\'m surprised no one else has bothered to reveiw your fict? it\'s awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love it ^.~

-Midnight Dreams

Congratulations, you\'ve written the long prophesized Worst Dragonball Story Ever. Stupid plot devices, people acting HORRIBLY out of character, far too much angst, and a style that shambles along like a zombie. Bravo.

oh man this is the longest fic i've ever read.....at least the longest that i havent gotten bored reading.
the humor is great but i must admit that it started getting really depressing there for a bit i'm so glad that
things are looking up....sorta.......anyway the only real complaint i have is trutens name i'm sorry but it
just doesnt sound like a girls name........and its used too much as a euphamism for trunks/goten yaoi.
plz update soon i cant wait to read more(i cant believe that i've actually read a fic this long without getting bored)

Wow...just wow. Well, thanks. I hope you're happy. You went and made me cry. Keep up the good work. =D

OMG! I just finisheadieading all of those chapters *rubs eyes* this is a great story so far! I love it. Tunks and Goten have really mucked things up though… I wonder what’s going to happen next. Please update soon.

Freaking awesome fic. I finally finished it, all 77 chapters wow. I thought it wasn't worth a read since stories carried out so long usually go to hell. But hey, I was wrong, and I'm glad I decided to finish it. It was simply fantastic. Well, what you have so far. I really hope that their love prevails...ew I sound all corny now. Anyways, pleeease continue. It's like a drama novel you just can't put down. *trys to act cool and lights a cigarette, coughs uncontrollaby, and walks off all cool like*

Good luck with the writing!

*Divine Punishment*

wow, that's all i can say so far... just wow. I started reading this at about noon and didn't finish until nearly midnight, that's how stuck on this i am. I loved how Trunks became the girl and Goten was the dominant one, because you don't see much of that, and even when Goten became the girl Trunks was still the submissive one too. That was kind of funny. And I seriously wanted to kill something when Gohan got changed into the girl, because i *really* wanted a happy ending for Trunks and Goten ;_; The part where Goten closed Trunk's eyes and kissed him was perfect, i was sooo hopeing that Trunks would put his prejudices behind him and be with the one he loves at that point, especially since Goten makes me want to cry, and now he's sick and all.

PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ I'm begging you to update this! I *really* need to know what happens or else I know I'll go insane! And if your not going to update it then at least do me a favor and tell me how you *planned* on ending it, because I just gotta know!!

*ahem* excellent work, as you can see I'm officially hooked, so once again PLEASE UPDATE!!! ^^;

Excelent story!!!!!!!!

Please update!

Luv the story..been readin it for a while now and i still luv it!! Keep it up man! =D

Oh My God! This fic is amazing! I started reading and BAM didn\'t stop until I finished with your most recent chapter. Absolutely beautiful work. I was laughing so hard through most of the chapters. You have such a flare for comedy and I really liked the ominous foreshadowing in Trunks\' dream. When the thugs actually came out I was biting my nails trying to stay calm so I could find out what happened next. I also really liked the lemon. (Nice and steamy). Great Job! Update soon please!

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