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i totally thought vegeta was angry when goku returned to the hyp. room because the minutes it took him to bo see pikolo and chichi were months in the chamber for vegeta...

it was a great story , i hope you will write a sequel .love your work

That was good.

More.

I really liked the part when 18 said that she hadn't lied about loving him forever. *Sigh* I do think Krillin got off easy though. Hmmm, I wonder how many 'honey dos' he is going to have to perform to make up for this. (I am not certain there is really any amount he can do to make up for it though.)

Well, it has to be nice to live in DBZ land and know for certain that your loved ones can see you from heaven.

Hmmm, I think I know what Goku was going to say/ask, but I am not absolutely certain.

hehe, Nice going on Trunks' and Goten's parts. I think I would have off loaded Bra in a very similar matter. I am not heartless, mind you, but diaper changing, if I don't have to, Ewwww!

why did bulma die and did she have AIDS.and did vegeta have it too.i meant to ask you thiforefore.can't wait to rread more..oh and is trunks and goten doing the same thing as goku and vegeta..so many quest........maria

*blink.....blink* Wow and ouch. I think I have way too much residual angst going on in my head from reading this chapter. All that thought and emotion processing, and it isn't even really mine to process. And if I feel that way about it, someone who is outside looking in, how the heck could I possibly know what it REALLY feels like, being on the inside? I have know idea what it would be like to be in Vegeta's shoes right now. Nor Goku's, who knows or at least feels that he is going to be the one to 'deal' with whatever happens because of this...this fiasco.

Ah, well, even angry, the Prince is somewhat concide: go: going after the lube and all. hehe (?)

My favorit line, or a close approximation.... 'How did Vegeta always managed to look like he was just coming out of a Porn flick' hehe. Yeah, he does, doesn't he. mmmmmmmmmmm *drools*

This is turning out to be a really good story. I like Ch:21. It was filled with anger, compassion, understanding, and at the end, a new outlook on life for our Prince Vegeta. Goku and Vegeta; what a pair

Oh, that's cruel! No lemon?! *shakes fist* I am mildly outraged, yet still satisfied with yet another great chapter..... But where the lemon at? *looks around and only sees ChiChi holding a baby*

Oh myell,ell, I am glad Vegeta and Goku spent all that time in the time chamber. Did wonders for the Prince's stamina in a fight. I have no idea to the outcome of Krillian's and 18's private fight. I don't know what I should hope for either.

Well, I kind of guessed about the possibility of Bra being Vegeta's daughter when the little girl felt so comfortable with him in the park. Don't know many anime ppl who would be so trusting of him. I have a feeling it has something to with scent and genetics. But now, what is he going to do? Just another bit of drama for this story. What a twist.
r Trr Trunks. And what WAS Bulma doing since it is so very obbvious she wasn't testing her daughter for who the father was. Hmmmm, maybe she did know, but had very strange reasons for not telling?

Oh, and I am all for the idea of a second answer to sayian problems. *gets popcorn and sits to watch the strip show.*

I feel bad for reading your story at your site, because then I don't leave anything here for other ppl to reference.

*shrugs* Well, ou Dou DO mind, I hope you'll tell me. (hehe, going to go check you site now)