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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh... I liked this chapter very much! Goku and his little inducement which turned against him ;) And Krillin with 18, yeah, that was deep and sad but promising. Thanks focredcredible chapter! Write more! ;)
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Krillin, poor fool. *rolls eyes*
Glad that Vegeta is getting over his depression. Also it looks like Goku is falling into the same trap that Krillin fell victim to. Or maybe Vegeta will become a \'better\' person.
I am interested in seeing how you develop the scenarios between the characters further.
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved the scene with Krillin and Eighteen. It make me feel so bad for almost totally ignoring them in my fic. It was so emotional. *sobs*
But I can not believe you did that to me at the end of this one. That was just so mean...but I guess that I have written aead ead enough smut for the time being...but Vegeta was just being ry mey mean there. Poor Goku...
But I can not believe you did that to me at the end of this one. That was just so mean...but I guess that I have written aead ead enough smut for the time being...but Vegeta was just being ry mey mean there. Poor Goku...
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, back to the resesitation(spelling) I don\'t think I will be calling Vegeta or Goku to do the job for a while. I don\'t think it would turn out well. *shakes head*
That was soooo like the Prince. Stuborn ass. Well, Goku made the \'rules\' now he has to live by them. Silly Goku, did he think that Vegeta wouldn\'t notice him doing \'that\' in the shower?
Hm, I don\'t know if the guardian or Piccolo would actually care. I wouldn\'t want to take the chance of being kicked out though. The time chamber has it\'s usefullness.
I really, really hope things work out for Krillin and 18. Don\'t know how it\'s going to happen, but I certainly hope it does.
That was soooo like the Prince. Stuborn ass. Well, Goku made the \'rules\' now he has to live by them. Silly Goku, did he think that Vegeta wouldn\'t notice him doing \'that\' in the shower?
Hm, I don\'t know if the guardian or Piccolo would actually care. I wouldn\'t want to take the chance of being kicked out though. The time chamber has it\'s usefullness.
I really, really hope things work out for Krillin and 18. Don\'t know how it\'s going to happen, but I certainly hope it does.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good. Vegeta\'s going to recover. *smiles>
It looks like my ancient history fic is going to be longer than I thought.
I don\'t think us authors always end where we want to.
Almost finished with chapter 13, but that as been delayed with work on my website.
http://www.authorgrid.com
Anyway, looking forward to more.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know I didn\'t even notice that that chapter was a bit short. I must be tired. I am a busy girl lately...Hmm...what to do say...Oh Trunks...I\'m feeling sorry for the poor kid. I like totally forgot that he lost his mom. *sobs*
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I said full of hope) No) Now let\'s hope Vegeta gets better! (From what i have read it seems that he is moving to a better state.
I always wonder...how do you manage to write so fast..? I think i have seen one your chapter which was done in 20 minutes and it was a really good chapter... Correct me if i confused you with someone else, but i think it was you. Yeah... ;) Waiting for next chapter!
I always wonder...how do you manage to write so fast..? I think i have seen one your chapter which was done in 20 minutes and it was a really good chapter... Correct me if i confused you with someone else, but i think it was you. Yeah... ;) Waiting for next chapter!
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was interesting to see Trunks way of thinking through this little fiasco.
Hmmm, Goku was willing to let the first confrontation go, but wants to help Vegeta get ready for the second round. I wonder what his motives are. If it\'s other than sex that is.
Vegeta with a full tummy and falling a sleep. I would think, \"How cute,\" under different circumstances.
Hmmm, Goku was willing to let the first confrontation go, but wants to help Vegeta get ready for the second round. I wonder what his motives are. If it\'s other than sex that is.
Vegeta with a full tummy and falling a sleep. I would think, \"How cute,\" under different circumstances.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta is in trouble! oh no!
this fic has got so much going on.
I know the affair is a two way street...but it isn\'t Vegeta\'s fault that Krillen tried to kill himself. I know 18 is angry, I would be too and I would probably do the same thing she is doing...well maybe not while my husband is in the hospital.
but the chapter b4 this one had an awesome lemon, and I loved it so much...it was very very good. *drools*
and I thought that maybe bad things were not going to happen and Goku might wake up next to Vegeta...boy was I completely wrong!
and that annoying ass reporter with the sunglasses was yammering on about it.--LoL glad to see he made an appearence on the scene. He is probably wondering where the \'great\' Mr. Satan is, so he can stop the fight.
they were almost literally on top of the Namek, and Piccolo jumped back and squawked an unmanly yelp--lmao...oh gosh that is sooo funny.
Well I am awaiting the next chapter...*bites nails* I wonder what is going to happen?
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this fic has got so much going on.
I know the affair is a two way street...but it isn\'t Vegeta\'s fault that Krillen tried to kill himself. I know 18 is angry, I would be too and I would probably do the same thing she is doing...well maybe not while my husband is in the hospital.
but the chapter b4 this one had an awesome lemon, and I loved it so much...it was very very good. *drools*
and I thought that maybe bad things were not going to happen and Goku might wake up next to Vegeta...boy was I completely wrong!
and that annoying ass reporter with the sunglasses was yammering on about it.--LoL glad to see he made an appearence on the scene. He is probably wondering where the \'great\' Mr. Satan is, so he can stop the fight.
they were almost literally on top of the Namek, and Piccolo jumped back and squawked an unmanly yelp--lmao...oh gosh that is sooo funny.
Well I am awaiting the next chapter...*bites nails* I wonder what is going to happen?
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa...this story is...wow. The Vegeta and Goku lemon...superb, of course. But then Krillin trying to kill himself and Eighteen going psycho...and Trunks and Goten and Gohan and everything. So good! I love this! And loved how Seventeen was there for support...even though Eighteen was trying to end Veggie. Great attention to detail. Me likey!