rate_review Reviews

This is a great story (like most of your stories ;\'s \'s dark, breathtaking and addictive but at the same time full of hope.
You are one of my favourite authors. Waiting for next chapter!

Aahhhhhhh.... Chaos. I thought a couple of chapters back Krillin was \"okay\" with Vegeta and Goku. Now I see that the relief, (or whatever it was he was feeling) had totally different consequences than what I thought it would lead to. Now I have to say \"Idiot,\" because of course, I don\'t believe that was the best thing for the short bald one to do. Of course, I am not him.

I am glad the only interfernce Goku gave was to take them someplace else. As 18 said gh, gh, I don\'t think it is over. I hope Vegeta wants to strengthen up, but he seems to be an emotional wreck and I don\'t know if he will continue to punish himself this way, or find a reason to live. Because for a sayian to stop eating and stop training and then bring disater on themselves is almost the same thing as Krillin cutting his viens. Stupid and suicidal.

Over all, (even with all of my over opinionatedness) I liked the chapter.

I had to laugh at Goku\'s stating of the obvious and Piccolos unmanly scream.

Yay! More updates.
I wonder what will happen next.

*puts bib on because I am drooling* Oh, that was good. *stares off for a moment* hehe, ah, that was worth the wait. So, if this was/is suppose to be \"just sex\" where do they go from here? There are still a whole bunch of questions that have been brought up but haven\'t been answered by the Prince so far.

That was great!

Vegeta wanted to yell at him for knowing what to do? -LOL Hmm. Goku does have many talents.

*sobs* This is just too emotional for me.
It was a great chappie.
I really feel bad for everyone...poor Trunks he keeps walking in on that kind of stuff...and his dad is just out there, not really there for him. And Krillen I wonder what Trunks was yelling about. Vegeta...it is just so sad he said he hated her and *Sobs* I don\'t think he killed her...but I guess I\'ll have to wait and see. And he cried!
I really can\'t wait to read more.
I\'m glad the father wasn\'t Yamcha, hehe...I figured Vegeta would kill him if it was Yamcha.
^.*
-MB-

Yep, you summed it up, angst. I did a very good job writing it to. It has even made me frustrated. I certainly hope that Trunks has now learned the lesson of knocking on his father\'s bedroom door. I think I would have learned the first time.

Well, it would seem that Goku knows Vegeta very well. Well enough to know that he shouldn\'t use his IT because Veget still had some unfinished trama going on.

It really makes me sad to see stories were the last thing you said to a person you love wasn\'t \"I Love You.\" It reminds me again to do so, often. It\'s one of those things that hits me in the gut. I am feeling very sorry for Vegeta right now. Very proud of Goku for sticking it out on the line for the unreasonable sayian also.

Angst. But at least Vegeta learned to cry. He has to let his sadness out.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh wow! you wrote this for me and I haven\'t even been around to appreciate it! *loves you, showers you with hugs and warm affection* Thank you so much! This was excellent and lovely to read. :} So angsty.

I wonder if any Vegeta/Krillin fans were born outta this? O_O

Anyway... *goes to read more*

I read the Trunks\' point of view stuff in Chapter 2 with great amusement.

((“Hey, my Mom died, I think my father might have killed her and now he’s fucking your other best friend, do you think you could stop training the kid and come back to handle this problem for me?”))

*dies laughing* Aha! XD You\'re so funny.

((Naked. Krillin. Naked. Vegeta. Fucking him.
Vegeta was fucking Krillin.
Unbelievable.))

Un-fucking-believeable? ;)

Awww... did he kill Bulma? Vegeta is very dangerous in this fic.

Wee! Alright, three chapters down... I must sleep now because I work in a few hours. O_o Thanks again, I\'ll read more of this lovely fic later! :)

(P.S. - Goku is sexy... it\'s just that Vegeta is sexy-er... godlike. Er. Yeesh.)