My responses are in bold and the coressponding parts are underlined. Emphisized text is boldundlined.
Kakarot looked at him, looked at him forever with those eyes that were still so fucking innocent and he hated them. Hated the eyes. Hated the innocence, hated the loyalty and the kindness that were in them. The depth of understanding, and more than that, he hated that he had just used Kakarot. -Oh really? Gee I wonder why that is? *smirks at Vegeta*
“What happened, Vegeta?” Kakarot asked, “With Bulma?”
“Why would I answer you now when I didn’t answer you before?” he snapped, leaned back against the tub, and flicked the water off. It was running down the wall and onto the floor, soaking the rugs in the bathroom and Kakarot’s pants. Getting his back wet as he sat there and tried to figure out what he was supposed to do with the bastard now. He had just kept fucking Krillin, and having sex with Bulma. - Looks like the prince has some major sexual frustration!
Kakarot shrugged again. “Did you call her a whore?” There was that tone of idiocy and cluelessness in Kakarot’s voice, but it was edged with the knowledge that there was no good answer to that question. Bulma had been Kakarot’s best friend for a long time, and you just didn’t go around and mess with a Saiyan’s best friends. Goku is smarter than he looks. *smiles*
“And if I did?”
“Did she deserve it?” Kakarot asked. That is an interesting question.
“Answer the question,” and wouldn’t you know it, Kakarot figured out that whole ‘lowering your voice’ trick too. Made him sit up and take notice anyway. -LOL Lower your voice trick?
Whatever he might have said was taken away by the pounding of a hard fist against the door, and his son’s voice: “Dad?” Urgent, worried. “Dad, are you all right? There was a lot of… Noise.” LMAO Noise mmhhhmmm. *chuckles*
Kakarot looked up at him, bangs flopped forward in his face, guileless expression. And it was there, the knowledge that if Vegeta didn’t say something, Kakarot was going to, but fuck it, his kid knew he was doing the little bald thing it was certainly an upgrade to be found naked in the bathroom stinking of Kakarot. Guileless? Upgrade? *laughs at the dea*
“He’s fine,” Kakarot said.
And that brought about a silence that was more painful confusion than anything else. He heard his son’s mouth open in shock and his mind go blank as he tried to figure out this new piece in the puzzle, probably stood there and tried to figure out just who was fucking whom in this bathroom. *ROFLMAO*
“Go the fuck away, Kakar Veg Vegeta snapped. Didn’t even stop, moved into the kitchen—naked—and yanked open the fridge, pulled out all the food he could get his hands on and started to eat. With no decorum, no attempt to be Princely and perfect, he just ripped opened the containers and ate whatever was inside of them. Glared at him hatefully, and Goku stood there and watched. *Blinks* Vegeta eating like a slob? Ha. I bet that surprised Goku. *snickers*
Even as he stoodre are and watched Vegeta eating, watched him as he burned in his own emotions, he wanted to be back up in that bathroom. Back when it was simple, and it wasn’t simple now. -LOL Simple huh? *grins and drags Vegeta and Goku upstairs*
Keep up the great writing. You seem to have a thing for Gohan. *smirks at author* \"Gohan\'s always worse.\" Worse you say? Well, out with it!
OH...have you read the new chapter for Saves the Day? MB said that she liked it which is surprising being that she loves Vegeta...put it this way, he didn\'t have a great time in that one. Oh and Cell is psycho...MB\'s words...not mine.
That was a great chapter!! Keep up the good work.
Vegeta and Goku got together after all. :-)
And Goku liked it!! -LOL
I wonder what he is going to see when he turnes around.
Go forth and write.
He would bet his no-longer existent tail on the fact that Chichi turned into a bobcat when you stripped her. She probably grew claws and spawned a black leather whip. --lmao, you know that is a little scary. But I am willing to be my closet full o f pepsi that, that is true also. I like how Vegeta incorperated that thought.
Grinned. “Offer me , Ka, Kakarot.”--Bold and sure of himself...really who could refuse that? WHO!?
It was almost cute if a Saiyan capable of destroying a planet could ever be cute.--LoL aww look at that Goku just destroyed a planet he is adorable!
“It wouldn’t be right.”--no it wouldn\'t, but everything is already so wrong.
Maybe she would hate him, and then he would love her again.--this man needs therapy a.s.a.p! Complicated love is such an adventure, and when the ride is Vegeta who would ever want to give that up? I feel as though Krillen may just ruin his life.
Bumping over every vertebra as if contemplating how best to snap the spine.--this scares me...I know this had been said before when he had sex with Krillen but it just sends shivers down my spine and makes me think he really did kill Bulma. Either way he seems to be a stagnate unstable. I dunno it seems like he can control himself well...but I\'m unsure. It is so weird to think Vegeta is running his finger down Krillen\'s spine but not in an intimate fashion....
“And stop coming to me.” All amusement gone. Only angry.--O_O! Vegeta has spoken, will Krillen listen?
I do wonder.
LMAO!!! at end notes they made me die laughing!!!
Goku: Who in the hell got me dressed this morning?!?!?!--O_O *hides shirts and whistles* Certainly not I! *runs off*
If Vegeta stalked me I would do flips and then I would stalk him back.
*sobs* actually yes I thought Goku would jump right in the sack with Vegeta at the sound of his deep sexy voice.
*places sandwich on Vegeta\'s bed* Look Goku a sandwich!!! *turns to Vegeta* Goku said he will now offer his services he is waiting for you in your room.
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! the evils of a fangirl!
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-MB-
He\'s a bad man, with a badass attitude. And some of us really like that, even if we couldn\'t handle it in real life.
Poor Krillin. I am about to say something that I hope nobody else reads, other than you. Maybe Krillin needs to get 18 a strap on; it might be something that he/she needs to continue on with married life. (ahhhhhhhhh, I blame the sake I am drinking, really I do!)
Okay, so now, I have my hands wringing in anticipation for Vegeta\'s week or less prediction to come true.
Hehe, what can I say, I really like VxG. Hmmmm, in reference to your other stories, who\'s holding out now? (I hope that you caught that.) Offended virgin? Riiiight. LMAO
Oh, and I REALLY loved the t-shirts. I wish I could wear similar prints at work, but alas, I\'d get fired.
He would bet his no-longer existent tail on the fact that Chichi turned into a bobcat when you stripped her. She probably grew claws and spawned a black leather whip. -ROFLMAO I could just picture Chichi doing that too. It just fits her personallity too.
Then he turned and walked away, unconcerned that Kakarot was staring after him, still blushing, and with the added burden of arousal that hung heavy in the air around the large one. - How cruel! Manipulating jerk. He knows it too. *chuckles*
Keep up the great work. Guku wearing personality shirts??? LOL
Forgive a lot of things, Goku could, but you didn’t screw around with the man’s family and friends. Nothing pissed him off more. --loved thine ine and so true
Besides it allowed him to get away with things that ‘smarter’ people wouldn’t be able to. Like watching Vegeta. He watched him a lot lately. Watched him do nothing mostly.--aww he is a stalker how cute. But he cares I\'m glad someone is looking out for Vegeta, or at least trying to. Goku just came back and for 12 days has been watching Vegeta that shows me how good of a friend or dedicated he can be.
and Vegeta was starting to lose weight.--no *sobs* he is depressed...my poor Vegeta
there stood Vegeta, arms crossed over his chest, smirking and looking highly amused to have found him, Son Goku, spying on him.--LoL
Krillin (still trying to figure that one out.) --rofl!
Is that a royalty thing? Do you have to be so stubborn when I’m just trying to help you?”--lmao!
“So,” he said this, fully realizing it was probably a bad thing for him to say, “If you had sex again you’d be hungry?”--O_O *crosses fingers* please oh please let the answer to this be yes. hehe Goku is so cute asking tha
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“Kakarot, are you offering something?”--again I repeat let the answer be yes...yes... you are so evil for ending it right there. evil I tell you!
end notes lol
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-MB-
Why, Goku, why? You really had to go and ask THAT question. LMAO
I have no idea what Krillin should do. OR what he is going to do. I wonder how 18 will feel about the whole situation if he decides to spill the beans.
Krillin is right though. You don\'t go messing with Goku\'s falmiy and friends while he is alive. Come to think about it, you don\'t go messing with them when he\'s dead either.
Ah-hem. Sorry about that. I don\'t think Goku would go into it that lightly though, even if he is trying to help Vegeta. So he\'s probably like, \'what? No!\' Then Vegeta will get pissed off....
Krillin: Then I\'ll show up and have sex with Vegeta.
Sarky: GAH! GO AWAY! *sprays Krillin with bug spray*