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“You need to eat, Vegeta. At least that.” The amused look hadn’t come back, but the fists loosened up a bit and Vegeta wasn’t shaking with annoyance quite as noticeably as he had been a moment before. Which just went to prove that whatever happened between him and Bulma was bad enough that the man obviously had not gotten over it yet. “Come on, you ate all that food after…” Hm. What to sa“You“You… Krillin…”

“I was hungry then.”

“So,” he said this, fully realizing it was probably a bad thing for him to say, “If you had sex again you’d be hungry?” LMAO.

Oh, look, the amusement was back in full-force. The arms crossed over Vegeta’s chest again and he looked at Goku from head to toe in that ‘I’m undressing you with my eyes’ sort of way that made him want to take a bath or something because it made him very uncomfortable. He shivered a little as he stood there and realized just how much he probably should not have said that sentence. A smirk, a real bark of laughter and Vegeta said: “Kakarot, are you offering something?” - ROFLMAO. *dies*

I could jpictpicture to look on Goku\'s face after that question.

Great chapter. Krillin\'s thoghts and emotions were described very well. Beware! Small people tend to squeeze into small spaces. *smirk*

ok...Vegeta staring at Goku was just plain scary and creepy.
Then when he pushed Krillen off and told him not to come back I kinda laughed and thought to myself \'yeah b/c Goku\'s back\' hehe...

I loved when Goku thought of Vegeta...the sight of tongue on his lips..etc...that was so yum eyes darker hotter! *dies*
I love how you word things.

lmao at Vegeta not thinking of sex with guys but much less do it...

hm so Vegeta wants to see how far Goku\'s innocence will go...*thinks* me too! I want to see too!

LoL at Goku when he says I gotta go okay okay! etc....
but naked Vegeta *drools* that is such a good thing.
He is damn near irrisitable in this fic! he is dark, angst filled, naked a lot hehe, a badass.
He is a sex god! he should join a union!!!!
lol at end notes!

Oh *sobs* I might havlledlled Goku by tossing lemons on them...? I knew I should have just poured lemonade over them instead.
^.*
-MB-

Yay- Goku\'s back wheeeee. Man, this story has already grown on me, like a spider laying it\'s eggs in my brain, and thoose eggs have hatched into to curiosity. *Happy Sigh*. Is Piccoloo going to make any humourous appearances in this as well? If he turns white at Goku and Veggie, I dread to think what would happen if he heard about Vegeta and Krillen. Maybe it would be like chemelons on white paper (they apparently explode).
As for syrup, it\'s dark chocolate syrup on chocolate covered rice crispies (choco snaps). I\'m such a pie. MMMMmmmm.....pie.

Well, that was really a shock for Goku, now wasn\'t it. Hehe, I think that he DID like what he saw, well, maybe he\'d like something er, er, but I will just have to wait and see.

I liked this chapter.

Yay ! Vegeta made Krillen go away ! Yay ! ~realizes she sounds like Special Ed from Crank Yankers~ Of course Goten and Trunks arent straight silly person....Trunks just hasnt realized how good of a friend Goten is and that he really can tell him everything at which point Goten will comfort him by shredding his clothes and having his wicked way with him. Duh ! Ooooh, Kakarrott was looking..naughty naughty.. I noticed a conversation about sex with Vegeta.... I would have sex with Vegeta in the blink of an eye...mmmmmmmmmm ~drools~ Yummy Vegeta. ~Gets lost in her own little lemony dream. Computer short circuits because of the drool ~

~Angel

Oww...Goku is back and he\'s not with Chichi. This is encouraging. But Vegeta is especially dark in this one. I love a Dark Prince. Too bad Trunks and Goten are straight otherwise this is a very interesting story. I take the Trunks and Goten thing back. It\'s good to have a change of pace every once in a while. Poor Krillin looks like he won\'t be getting anymore Geta lovin\' anytime soon. Heh heh...

Goku with his mout haning open at what he saw. LOL

LOL
More!

::looks up from huddling in a corner:: \'Is Krillin gone now? Is it safe to read about Vegeta\'s sexy body?\'

Yay, more plot.

Great chapter.

Well I better post chapter 11 now.

Finaly I\'m finished with that chapter. It took forever.

Interesting. Don\'t know if I like it or not yet. I guess I will have to keep reading to find out, huh?

Despite that, the story is written very well, and I like the POV\'s making up the story rather than just a story kind of story. (Did that make any kind of scence?)