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Hay I thought everyone who writes G/V are also adicted to G/T thought it might make a challange for you guys *Grins evily and milisiousely at the plot bunny* Actually even in the TV seiries Goten and Trunks come across as being gay in my opinion...

Love this so far and I can\'t tell you enough how greatful I am for what your doing for me, anything I can help you out with just ask.

It\'s ok, you don\'t need to update on my site as often if you don\'t want to.

-Hudine-

No, no, no! Still creepy Krillin sex! Aaaaargh! It was the same sex, from another POV! Arrrgh! ::continues rocking in corner until Goku bursts in and decapitates Krillin to use his head as a bowling ball:: But since I am still reading this fic, you must realise that I do like it in a strange perverted \'I don\'t want to analyse that aspect of myself\' sort of way. ^_^

Most of the time it took the formerly bald one longer.--like that he thought of as formerly bald...he will always be the blad one won\'t he...hehe

Nobody gave a damn if you promised outloud that you’d never get involved with anyone but the promised. Who cared? It was just words.--he seems very angry...it was just words...wow that seems intense to me. And it is so sad that he just wants to have sex with Gohan to prove marriage is nothing...or maybe it\'s just that Vegeta is so sexy no one can resist.

The blue eyed woman that promised him something she obviously hadn’t ever meant to deliver,--that is sad, he was hurt, and even though love disgusts him I think that is what he needs the most.

Pressed his thumb into the spine every time and considered cracking it. Didn’t though.--that is scary. *thinks twice before ever having sex with Vegeta* you never know what he is thinking...

They were both worthless idiots that said things they didn’t mean and forgot that their were people that needed them around once in a fucking while.--oh *sobs* he needs Goku, and he always runs off. *hugs Vegeta* I just love this...

Goten had three girlfriends at the moment --rofl! figures...sex maniac!

“Hey, my Mom died, I think my father might have killed her and now he’s fucking your other best friend,--uh..what...lets rewind that. Vegeta killed her?!?!?!?!?!?!? Killer Vegeta......*drools*

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I love this ficcie it only gets better and better. Krillen is insane he is obsessed. He better be careful and Vegeta is well...he is disturbed. I love it! I was looking for this at Dark Saiyan and was like :( she didn\'t update it. I just happened to look at this page. I hardly ever come to this front page b/c I have the sec section saved in my favorites so I automatically just go there, so I was very glad I looked.
yeah I am G/V addict too!!!!! *throws lemons on Goku and Vegeta* yay!!! hehe...

^.*
-MB-

It is so wierd that Goten and Trunks are not together in this fic. Even wierder than Krillin/Vegeta sex. I wonder what would Goku think of all of this.

*is in shock...might be comatose* check my pulse...please
BECAUSE ITS BEATING!!!!!
what the heck is wrong with me? I loved that...*sobs* I am a freak.

and Vegeta would grin at him, even when he couldn’t see it, he knew that grin was there. --loved that

The knowledge that he was disappointed by this--*is torn between feeling sad and going to find Goku*

Looking like a man haunted with something that destroyed him--I really love the poetry of this fic and the description of the rooms...lovely.

Strange that he wanted to know what it was that could break the almighty Prince. And maybe it was nothing. --ah I don\'t blame him...I do pity him somewhat (Krillen that is) But again I love your description.

Someone would ask eventually.--and I am that someone. *appears in room* Krillen what do you think you are doing? Vegeta belongs to Goku...you better hope you don\'t get your ass beat. *smiles* Ah but on a sserious note...how did this all get started I wonder? I kinda do feel badly for the little guy. *pats Krillen*

Come back and find that Bulma had died, that whatever human parts Vegeta had at one point had died with her --how sad

Or maybe he’d visit Krillin and ask him how he got bruises on his back the same size and shape of Vegeta’s hands.--rofl!!!!


Also: Challenge answered from Marie at Aff.net, and Hudine’s challenge for straight Goten and Trunks. (Though it pains me so.)--O_O please..check my pulse..again...*is comatose*

Well I like this story, it is great just like all your others. I will try to keep up with it at Dark Saiyan too.
^.*
-MB-

O_O Vegeta...and...Krillin? ::falls to floor and curls up into a ball in the corner of the room rocking backwards and forwards, until Goku bursts in through the window and begins to screw Vegeta:: Yay! I think I will carry on reading it though, even if Krillin is doing things that only people who aren\'t Krillin should do. I might even read it at the other site. It\'s so sad, but I treat sites like places to go, and I\'m a bit of a hermit in the real world and the net. Anyway, good fic. I could have just written that at the start and saved a lot of time. Oh well.

OMG!!!
This is brilliant, at first I didn\'t know it was Krillin... this is so new... so different!
I can tell this is another one of your fics I will be reading when I\'m actually \'supposed\' to be doing work, but hey, thats colleges fault... if the assignments were as good as your fics maybe I would concerntrate more! ^_^

I\'m off to this new site Darksaiyan.com... I\'m not sure but I think I\'ve been to this site before... well it says so on my address bar??? O_o

Anyways great fic, I NEED to read more!!!! ^_^

Oh wow! I was eve even distrubed by the Krillin/Vegeta sex. This is cool. I will try to keep up with it at DarkSaiyan.

That was .. distur. Wo. Wonderfully written as always but very disturbing. Hard to imagine, but I am intrigued. I cant wait to see more. I was shocked to find that the person on the other end of all of Vegetas abuse was Krillin. I was thinking Goku, at one point Gohan flashed through my mind. I am very confused by this fic. I think I may just be having a blonde moment.

~Angel