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by jaygoose

person Macha
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, and a very nice bang it was too. Radditz is such a perv. Poor confused Android Cell.

Breaking up the love fest, what\'s that all about? j/k

I am very happy that you finished your side story to HoK, and a good story it was too. Congradualtions.
person Yuurei
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Stunned me a bit with Raditz popping back in. Very nice. Update again soon, please.
person Macha
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do you really want an answer to that last question? Muwhahahahahahahah. j/k

So Cell desided that staying away from the group was the best way to deal, huh? Interesting. Seems as though the plan may have backfired.

Glad that Bulma still has her brains and Chichi still has her... uh... heart. :)
person macha
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this was very angsty. I did like it though. It also seemed to have given a little bit of information about what's going to happen in THK, not enough to give any big secrets away though.

I've had my own share of 'why DID I get involved relationships', so I can kind of sympothies with Kilik. I also believe that it has to be difficult for Cell NOT to be able to love another. That really has to suck.

I like this story more and more with each additional chapter.
person Card
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...smut. Does the soul good. *looks content*

Glad to hear that Radditz is not his mate anymore, tho. Radditz is no good. (Speaking of which, don\'t I have a chapter to write? ...walks away.)

Gasp, but I must say that I really like your Cell. I have no idea why or how (considering all things) but I really like him. *sigh*

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person Card
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*catatonic*

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*still catatonic*

If THAT was WHAT you were going to do with RADDITZ, then I say KILL the bastard! *falls over dead* Anyway, beautifully written as always. Loved it. Adored it. Hate you with a passion because you\'re slowly killing all my favorites. But you\'re doing an excellent job. ;)
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person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh...why did Kakarott have to say \"well then show me!?\"
Now Cell is going to show him death!!! NO!
Oh yay that was 4 me and I loved every last bit of it! woo hoo!
you are so awesome.
I loved the description of Cell\'s hair as leaves and his personality is definately an addicting one.
Oh and Goku was so awesome...so in character when he walks by Piccolo and ahow how he is doing...loved that so much.
You really are an amazing writer. Cell is just ugh! Seeking out to make someone an orphen how cruel! *sobs* poor saiyajins, poor Kabu.
I think Goku did a very good job at kicking Cell\'s booty!
As long as Vegeta and Goku both got to Heaven then I will be fine b/c they will be together...lol
But Cell is just so...scary, he is heartless. It really is rather sad to read. Especially when Goku saw Vegeta...what was left of Vegeta...gosh that\'s enough to make tears stain my eyes.
I can\'t wait until the next chapter!!!!!

^.*
-MB-
person Card
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sobs until she can sob no more * My pooor Poooooor pooooooooooooooooooooooor Goku! (Or Kakarot, as the case may be.) You\'re a vicious meanie, Cell! *says this from behind rock.*

*goes forth to find Gohan * *kicks Gohan from behind large rock *

Okay. I knew this was going to happen, but dammit! I\'m still upset that Goku had to die. Poor dear. *pats him * At least he was impressive there for a few moments. *sniffle*

Well, now that I\'m all depressed about the death of my favorite, I\'m going to go write smut!

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person Webtester01
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM

That was great!!!!


I hope Marai Cell helps out.


Keep up the good work!


person Hecate18
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::meeps:: Wow I\'ve missed alot!

That was great!!!
You\'ve really left me speechless. It was so sad... Poor Piccolo and 17, and Vegeta\'s dead! ::sobs:: Poor Goku! U_U

Everything is now starting to fall into place, I had a feeling Kabu was Goku/Kakarot and Vegeta\'s son.

...Whats this, the next chapter has blood, death and destruction!!!
::Runs off to steal Mirai Trunks time machine::

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