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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very good ^^
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good i liked it. I just didn\'t like the fact that it was all ONE PARAGRAPH. You make a new paragraph each time some one talks, and it\'s was easier and better on the eyes for some people. but other wise, keep up the good work.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I mean it\'s easier on the eyes and better to read when it\'s not all smashed together, damn typos. heh.. ^^;
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE the style of how this was written. blunt and in your face, but stylish and tastful.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was intense. I like it. Only one thing. Next time let the text be in blocks or something. It\'s hard to read, when it\'s all together. Other than that, you did a really great job. :)