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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Bravo! I've read a lot of yoai but this was just fab! I think the diologue when used was fantastic and the description of the sex was so hot. You are a very good writer!
The only comment I want to make is that you had a couple of typos, the kind of things we all do when we type, like letters missing where we missed the key. All this would be solved by a proof read a couple of days after writing.
Again, loved it!
The only comment I want to make is that you had a couple of typos, the kind of things we all do when we type, like letters missing where we missed the key. All this would be solved by a proof read a couple of days after writing.
Again, loved it!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT..SOOO COOL!! YOU DID GREAT
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT..SOOO COOL!! YOU DID GREAT
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It`s a funny thing, you know... I seem to be going to the bathroom rather often these days.... I wonder why...^_^
VCR
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August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the nappa/vegeta hint was really...uhm...augh. yes, that fairly describes it, \"augh\".
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April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot. Good ol Vegeta. n fen feeling inadequate in one departmentt, he\'s just gotta prove that he\'s better in another. Hehe. That\'s what we love about him. And Goku! Well, that quesetion through me for a loop too. Who\'da thunk he\'d be a little slut? Well, at least he realizes that Chi-Chi just doesn\'t have what it takes to satisfy her man. Good. I never liked Chi-Chi anyway. Except when she was a kid. But nevermind that. Keep typin\'
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February 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A very nice PWP! Very well-written and both are very in-character. Loved it!
Two thumbs up! XD
Two thumbs up! XD