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for The Breakdancer

by SDMY

person Lynn
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!!!!! But where is the rest????????? Please update soon :)
person Terra Harpel
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello,

wow that was a realy good start!!!

Do you think you will continue soon??
I hope you will !!

great work!

-terra-
person katt_jam
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great storyand I started to read it from ff.net. now I'm notallowed to go in there anymore because it spywspyware. I'm glad I found it here so please add more chapters soon. I love this story already.
person yabil
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi. i like your fiction but can i request. i was so suspend i didn't know what the next after that.will heero and duo meet again?.tnx.
person Esca
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well i didnt like the fact that relena wasnt strait and not pestering heero to like her and hilde not doing the same for duo and in the end hilde gives up but relena turns on them and hurts them both along with their classmates who also hate duo
person Esca
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well i didnt like the fact that relena wasnt strait and not pestering heero to like her and hilde not doing the same for duo and in the end hilde gives up but relena turns on them and hurts them both along with the help oos cos classmates who also hate duo. and in the end heero and duo bash relena (relena bahing) and dup joins the group
person LEEMAX^_^
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I WAS WONDERING IF YOU WERE GOING TO UPDATE SOON IT IS A VERY GREAT START IN A STORY AND I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE.
person Creamette
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good fic...I do hope that you continue to write on it...lots of 1x2 ^-^ oh and the link for the pic doesnt work...@_@
person diabloangel
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like and can not wait to see how the rest of it turns out. I love that you have Relena being nice to do and is still in character. Please continue with the good work.
person Sister Raven Dreamer
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please say there\'s more! This is starting off very nicely. It looks to be a fun ride. Of course, being who I am, I hope for a happy ending...
Um, I do have to point out one thing: when Trowa appears on stage, he\'s introduced as \"Triton Bloom,\" but from there on in you have him called \"Trowa.\" I just thought you should know.
Anyway, hope to see more! Ja ne!

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