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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

That was a real great story.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Oh, I love it! Please write some more. That last chapter with Chi Chi and Vegeta was absolutely awesome! God, can't I have a Saiyan man in bed?...

Awesome! I can see you haven't updated in a long time, but I do hope you continue this work. It's nice for a change to see a wonderful portrait of Chi-Chi. Everyone usuahatehates her, but I completely understand her sorrow and anger. I mean I'm sure those that write hate fictions about her is around 13? 12? lol. I'm 27, and I can tell you this; If my husband treated me like Guku does her, well.....let's just say I'd blow up too. Mostly out of sexual frustration. Seriously! Goku has a body of a GOD and he doesn't know ho use use it... :p
Vegeta, however, is very sexual by nature. So you made their affair very belivable. Your writing is wonderful and all characters are in character. No OOC'ness.

Well, good luck with your work, and I hope to read some more soon. Hopefully to this story.

Lea~

Great fic. I really enjoyed it. So, does it end here or will there be more? Can you email me and let me know? Arigatou.

EXCELLENT! What a plot twist! I thought you were going to focus on the kids Trunks/Pan and Goten/Bra, I never expected this new plot! It\'s pretty damn good, tho!

andi i read this fic almost 2 years ago at eoc\'s site. i was so excited to fine you up dating it but its still not finished. do you have therther site other than dt that i can read your fics. any ways still am loving it update it soon.bye j

wow what a story..can\'t wait for you to update..this little girl has alot of energy...please update soon...maria