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Great Story, really hot, in more then just one way *smirk*
I love your style of writing and I hope you will continue being a great writer!

Awww, that was sooo cute! :D I really got the impression toward the end that Vegeta was mistaken about the reason for Kakkarot wanting to accompany him. It was so easy to imagine that Kakkarot had always been watching him from afar, having fallen deeply in love with him, and that Vegeta never noticed him because of the difference in their social classes. That whole thing about the affection in Kakkarot's eyes, and the way he was so gentle with him definitely leads the reader to believe that the situation was more than just another low-class Saiyan trying to climb the social ladder. Could there be a sequel, perhaps, exploring this scenario? Just my little, fervent hope. I understand if you're too busy or aren't interested in writing such a thing. This was certainly very good as a stand-alone fic. Very seductive, and nicely detailed. I enjoyed the description of Saiyan culture immensely. Everything about this fic was refreshing. Terrific job. ^_^

only if more men could be like yours

wow i loved it cabbie went to go see his grandchild..my ass.

LMAO!!! Great fic! THis is definately going on my list of favourties! Great fic, excellent lime and truly amusing ending. I'm going to go have a look though your other stories now, look out for my reveiws!

That was great!

I hope you write a sequel.

What did you say the name of that Day spa was? Can I get a phone number and the address? I could use a little bit of that myself. :)

Hot steamy lemons. Yum!

Aw. That was such a nice little piece of smut. Good boy, Kakarot! Knock out more people on your quest for Vegeta. And good boy, Vegeta, coming up with a way to keep Kakarot around. That way they can have more steamy encounters. ;)

Liked it very much. *nods*

Card!~

Hahahaha, nice. I really enjoyed this little story. Sneaky little Kakarotto knocking out that Cabbe guy and doing that to Vegeta. ^_^