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Count me among the ones faithfully reading this fic. To be fair I just found it a couple days ago and pretty much read it through in one go, but I'd like to see the loose ends tied because the story has come so far - it seems a shame just to let it go.

I was incredibly sad at then end of chapter sixteen but at then end of chapter seventeen I got incredibly happy so I'm kinda feeling like I'm on a roller-coaster x) But I feel it in my bones that the story is coming to its crescendo and I'm twisting in my seat wondering how often I'm going to check for an update tomorrow. Maybe once an hour? Once every 2 hours? Once every half hour x) ? Hehehehe it tickled me when Duo went to have his last tutoring session and told the tutor that he needed to know how to make love to a man x) I could -hear- the books hitting the floor. Hilarious. And way to go Stepper!! Hooking up with a stud all the beasties shrank away from! As terrifying as Deathscythe is I bet Stepper has in wrapped around her little finger, err... hoove? x) I think the way you handled that first kiss was absolutely perfectly done. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and seeing if Duo and Heero will be in time to save Quatre and the rest of the kingdom from Dorothy and Zechs that still need to be dealt with. Speaking of them, Dammit Merian! I'm so pissed at her and sad for Wufei, but a bit comforted by Quatre taking responsibility and being there for his childhood friend. Until next time! xoxoxs ~ Kei-chan

Oh, I can't wait for Dorothy to get what's coming to her! Seriously!
And is there no way to save Trowa, even now? Can't anyone heal him before it's too late?
Just hopin'.

Very, very cool. Looking forward to the outcome...despite the chaos that's sure to happen along the way. Thanks for your VERY speedy updates. Looking for more of this story is the high point of every day!

Zechs that bastard!! He went and did it!! ...seemingly over and over again. I hate him now, too! That's not fair! Why can Dorothy bring forth Trowa's hidden nature?? D: She's gonna ruin EVERYTHING!! Just when Heero and Duo started getting along, too!! Ahhh, sad times! xoxoxs ~Kei-chan

AHHHHH!!!! WHAT THE HECK!?!?!? "Their innocence sickens me. Take care of it" !?!?!?!? You can't SAY things like THAT in a fic that contains a RAPE WARNING!!! AHHHHHH!!!! Dx

On another note, two updates in one day!! I'm glad i thought to check back here before calling it quits for the night x) I HAD to read it before I went to bed and I'm glad I did, though you almost gave me a heart attack!!! First there was that love potion fiasco that was making me cringe and hoping Duo wouldn't drink it, which he would have had Treize (the bastard!) not taken it by accident. AND THEN you have an ELIGIBLE MAIDEN take Duo's first kiss in a SWEET way!! Thank goodness he didn't feel anything for it, but THEN you turn around and have Heero almost BUTT RAPED by that bastard Treize!! Who probably would have attacked him without the potions influence!! AGH!! I had butterflies playing Tackle Football in my gut up until Duo saved Heero's virginity!!! Kudos to your for excellent suspense though =O If i hadn't know already, that these chapters were written, I'd be tempted to think you were toying with my emotions! D:

Lol line to single out: "it wasn't part of his job description!" Lol that cracked me up on the inside, because the hilarity of that comment was warring with my worry over Heero's innocence being stolen but someone who WASN'T Duo x) Can't wait to read the next chapter~~ ah! Which reminds me of how YOU ENDED THAT LAST CHAPTER!!! AGH!!! I'ma bundle of nerves again! Ah! I recall seeing 17 chapters posted for this fic (tho the links didn't direct to the actual chapters) and seeing how this is chapter 15 (technically 14) there are (possibly) only 2 prewritten chapters left (unless you've written more) and I don't remember seeing a complete tag listed by the story... -gasps- I may need to wait for further updates! If you dish out more cliffie like words of dialogue like last time I may go insane D: !!! Lol Oh snap, this 'review' is long, I should shut up and go to bed before I find something else to rant about x) I adore you for taking the time to reformat ALL of this text to upload on here x( If you're gonna do something like that, especially because I think i kinda instigated it, the least I can do to repay you is be diligent about leaving you thorough reviews/feedback on what I've read!! xoxoxs ~Kei-chan!!! x) P.S. I HATE Dorothy. P.S.S. if Zechs does anything to harm Heero, Duo, or Trowa, I'll hate him too!!! x(

I'm loving this story, just so you know. It's got some wonderfully original ideas and concepts, and a gripping plot. Looking forward to some Heero/Duo romance, maybe...and an eventual demise for the wicked and plotting Dorothy! Thanks for posting so much at once, and frequently thereafter. I truly enjoy this story!

Yay!! So happy Wufei cleared everything up with Heero! And wahoo!! Now we know Heero's heritage! Poor Trowa! He has to be the queen's clown D: I have a feeling, that she's fallen for him, cuz there's no way she'll be attracted to her brother. WHich makes me wonder at other possibilites, especially with that rape warning that appears at the beginning of every chapter. . . I feel for poor Relena D: Looking forward to the next chapter!! ~Kei-chan

Oh noooooo! Cliffhanger D: AHHHHHH The anticipation! So happy the 1,2,3 were reunited again, but EGADS I can only hope that 1 and 3 are willing to listen to Duo long enough for him to explain that he is not the Shadowman that killed Heero's mom and that he had to keep his identity secret for his safety D: !!!! I am happy that the first thing Heero said after being mute so long was Duo's name x3 And maybe he's clued into the fact that he's drawn to Duo for a reason. It would be nice for some romance to spark between the two but I'm sure it won't be an easy task; especially with Heero glaring daggers at poor Duo :/ I really, really, really really dislike Dorothy x( I'm hoping she'll get killed off soon so she can stop threatening Duo and Heero's happiness!!! Sorry you have to put up with all this reformatting garbage Aff site re-haul is forcing on all you authors =( Hopefully they will fix it? I'm sure many have complained about it. Its so hard to read one gigantic block of text... its why paragraphs were invented! D: Ah well, hope to read more of your work soooooooon!!! :D Ja ne!! xoxoxs ~Kei-chan

I think i started reading this story before, because certain things sounded really familiar, like the conversation between 4 and his sister/wife. I've read all but the last chapter you have posted here, but i think i missed something. At the end of chapter 9 Catherine breaks up the fight between Heero and Duo, then the chapter is over, and in the next chapter there is mention of a 'night before' where i'm guessing 1,2, and 3 have some bonding time before Trowa gets jumped. I'm wondering if aff cut it off when you added that chapter, I know its done stuff like that before. When i tried to find your fic else where to see if i find th missing chapter i came across your geocities site, and noticed on there this fic was up to chapter 17, only the links didn't work. They directed me to a 'no longer available' webpage. Have you moved your fics elsewhere? I really like your writing and would like to finish this story. Feel free to write me at the above email address :) It's almost 1:30 AM, i can hardly keep my eyes open and focus on writing, so hopefully i'll hear from you soon and can get back to following this awesome story! xoxoxs ~Kei-chan