rate_review Reviews

Oh please oh please oh please write more soon. I really like this story so far. And I'd have to say this ne one of the best yaoi stories I've ever read before in my life. Anyway please continue

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. ^-^; I hadn't been on adultfanfiction.net for a long time. So VERY sorry.

Awsome story so far! I can't believe I missed it before....That butler! He is such fucking bastard!!!! When I get my hands on him
he'll wish that he never been born!!!!

Ok! now please continue while I form more tourturing ideas for him(and none of them is a fast death::narrows her eyes: wil will slow and painful::has a malice look in her eyes::) goodbye!

gah!!!!!!!!!make Kai and Rei meet alrready!Sorry.I love your new chapter and update soon. ;) I would really love to read the next chapter.

pleasewrite more....it's sokawaii! i'm a Kailoveraswell.......i feel for the poor guy.anyways...please write more soon!

some very good story you've got here! well written no doubth, realistic and very complete, one can see you know what you are talking about. You are in perfect control of the story you don't leave any wholes unfilled and you provide your readers with some usefull information. Your style is also very good, your english fluent and cared for, not excessively poetic or pretty, but obviously good. You space yourself and separate your paragrafs. One thing though: Kai isn't shy. An abused child that has also been rapped won't get undressed in front of other people simply because his clothings are his protection, he feels safe with them. If you remove his clothing he feels unprotected, so it has nothing to do with being shy. However I do like the progress in the relationship between Kai and Tala, his newests daddy ne? When is Rei getting into this story btw?
There is nothing wrong with your rating, R is the higest and in this site anything is alowed. those that don't like can move to other sites, but don't worry I doubth anyone will actually comment on anything.
You seem to like putting kai through a lot a suffering... if you want to read a storyn won worse then yours, I advice Haruka Hana's A World so Cold from fanfiction.net. Yes I know its big, but it's also worth it.
Keep up with the good work!

I praise you since out of all the stories i read in aff you the fastest one to update. You really care about your fans anyway i really love you story please keep up the good work Yuk

Sweet =P A week with Rei, yami ! =D

Another great chapter. I like how you made Volitaire nice. It suits him better than evil. Update soon please.

wow . . . write more soon!? ONEGAISHIMASU?

Nice to see a new chapter is up. Keep up the great work.