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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST FINISH STORY QUICKLY!!! *ahem* sorry for me yelling. Your story is really, really, really good. You should finish the story quickly....OR I SHALL RID THE WORLD OF THE INTERENT....*thinks it over*....ummm....how about we agree you finish the story and i go get help...heh heh heh. Oh and you are a great writer too. Keep up the work. Nya!
-Kuro-
-Kuro-
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kisana:Aw!
Yami:Oh lord.
Kisana:What is that suppose to mean!?
Yami:You are going to act like a bubble headed idiot.
Kisana:I only act like that when I read stuff like this.
Yami:Yeah right. (rolls eyes) it\'s more like everytime you hear a Rei and Kai moment.
Kisana:That\'s right. Anyway I\'m Kisana.
Yami:I\'m Yamikihi or Yami for short. Yeah I have a femish name for a boy.
Kisana:No you don\'t. Anyway we\'re siblings and I dragged my older brother to review with me. Isn\'t htat cool and sweet of him?
Yami:More like i was threatened. Anyway Kisana, hurry up and do what you have to do.
Kisana:Ok well I wuv ya story!
Yami:She wants more.
Kisana:Yup! My brother said it all. So later!
Yami:later.
Yami:Oh lord.
Kisana:What is that suppose to mean!?
Yami:You are going to act like a bubble headed idiot.
Kisana:I only act like that when I read stuff like this.
Yami:Yeah right. (rolls eyes) it\'s more like everytime you hear a Rei and Kai moment.
Kisana:That\'s right. Anyway I\'m Kisana.
Yami:I\'m Yamikihi or Yami for short. Yeah I have a femish name for a boy.
Kisana:No you don\'t. Anyway we\'re siblings and I dragged my older brother to review with me. Isn\'t htat cool and sweet of him?
Yami:More like i was threatened. Anyway Kisana, hurry up and do what you have to do.
Kisana:Ok well I wuv ya story!
Yami:She wants more.
Kisana:Yup! My brother said it all. So later!
Yami:later.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, If we keep reviewing, will you keep writing? :3
I\'ve been reading this since last year, through all the lang waits between chapters. Beating on Mariah was fun, and I like your costume ideas for Rei and Kai. Finally Kai\'s free and safe, again, this time hopefully for good. You\'re nearly at the end - keep going for the last haul!
I\'ve been reading this since last year, through all the lang waits between chapters. Beating on Mariah was fun, and I like your costume ideas for Rei and Kai. Finally Kai\'s free and safe, again, this time hopefully for good. You\'re nearly at the end - keep going for the last haul!
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated and Kai was found alive.Well hope you update again soon!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fuck fuck fuck fuck ...THAT FUCKING carlton DUMBASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG i was sooo angry grrrrrrrr fuck him the bastard when does he effin die ????? i cant wait for him to BLOODY SUFFER A BAD DEATH!!!!!!!
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anyway please update *trys to calm down*
this is like my favorite beyblade fic ever ever ....when DO WE GET TO SEE SOME REI X KAI ACTION!!?!?!? XoD!!!
please update!!luv ya hun <3
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anyway please update *trys to calm down*
this is like my favorite beyblade fic ever ever ....when DO WE GET TO SEE SOME REI X KAI ACTION!!?!?!? XoD!!!
please update!!luv ya hun <3
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor lil Kai iz finally safe again...... ITZ SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow! This is my favorite fanfic for the rest of my life. I love this. The kai and rei pairing is perfect too. Awesome story; it hurts me when Kai is treated is horribly, it makes me cry when he\'s sad, and smile when he\'s happy with Tala and Rei (more with rei cause they love each other). The rape thing may be a little much though. Seriously, no offense or flames or anything mean, but the bullies raping him could of been changed in a different way where they just hurt him by beating him. But this story is still the #1 fanfic in my book, and I intend to read this till the end. When it\'s complete, i\'ll re-read again. Thanks for sending this out to the public. Good luck with the future chapters, and can\'t wait for the rest of the story.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you must update and will someone arrest carlton for gods sake!!!!
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, please update soon i wanna know what will hapened next..
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I\'m sooo glad they found Kai. Hope the White Tigers bugger off. They\'re sickos. And hope they get Carlton for his shit psycho mind. Looking forward to the next part.