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Oh please,let Kai survive.DIE CARLTON.Anyway,please don\'t let Kai die.Oh and Carlton,please let him get caught.

omg. you\'re realy great at this whole torture thing. poor kai. someone needs to kill that carlton bastard. awesome chapter despite the kai torture. ah but you hurt the ones you love, ne? well, can\'t wait for next installment. wonder what Rei\'ll do...

That was kewl damn cliff ending though stupid ending!!!*shakes fist at story*i loved it though

I love your story. Its one of the best I read yet,but I my have to change my mind if you kill off sexy Kai. *please up date soon*

kill carlton! make rei and kai ****!!! muahahahaaaa!!! *chokes*

-mouth hanging open-....My mouth was like this for almost the whole chaper...what a fucking sick freak!!!!! -kills carlton- BASTERD!! -unkills him and does everything he did to Kai back to him- HOW DO YOU LIKE IT HMM!?!?!?!?! -saves Kai and puts him in the best hospital ever with security gaurds. T_T....and you know the worst part? Things like this probably happen all the time.....-saves all the hurting kids- T_T....;-;...soooo sad. Please update soon.....poor Kai.....-GASPS- POOR REI WHEN HE FINDS OUT!!! O_O...Rei is going to KILL the MoFo if he finds out..-shakes- Fucking prick....ANYWAY. Update soon. Ciao. -Cd

OMFG you finally get Kai and Rei to admitt there feelings and then you do that!!!!!!! You are truely an evil person. Shame shame!!!

Love Lots,
Darkkit

I like where the plot is going and everything but it seems slightly rushed. I think it would help if you get a beta reader to improve you grammer and you structure and stuff. I would offer but I tend to take over people\'s stories when i do that kind of stuff so I stopped offering to help. Still I\'m sure there are tonnes of people out there who would love to help edit your story. So if you fix it up a bit I\'ll keep reading because the plot is good.

YOU GOT TO FINSIH THE STORY!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! PLZ!!! I\'M BEGGING YOU!!!! WHAT MORE COULD YOU ASK FOR??!?!??!?! *thinks a bit* you know let\'s just leave it tht you finish stroy and I will never find out want you want to leave us happy. okay? goodie. Now will Rei adn Kai ever french kiss? I wonder. *begins to think too long.............................................................................................................huh? oh forgot to sumit! sorry. by the way I ejoy your story! nya!

*lots of swearing in french* i was just about to cry when you ended it!!!!!!!!!!! god damn it!!!!!
update soon!!!!!!