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This is getting really good. Man I hope they find Kai in time though. What a sick bastard that Carlton is. Hope he gets what\'s coming to him. Looknig forward to the next part where hopefully they\'ll get him back.

My god, ur twisted!O-o lmfao, awh poror lil baby kai *hugz and kizzez*

AAAhhh!!! that\'s the biggest cliffhanger ever!!! what\'s going to happen to Kai!! Is Rei going to rescue him? ARgh!! I wanna strangle carlton and slash him and feed him to the dogs..... grrr... lol, now, if you really want this to be a review, you could stretch out the details between conversations a little, like, to keep it going interesting and creating a more descriptive setting. Other than that.... I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!! hehe nice fic! a little gory on the rape, but otherwise nice

nyaa!
i luuuved this fic *___*
please update it soon ^^
i liked Kai more when he was innocent *_*
but oh well...
it\'s great the way it is now xD
keep going girl xD
luved your fic!!!!!!!!!

More rapes? Gang rapes? What is it with you and rapes? Kai can\'t get any more childish, what effects are you going too propose for him when he wakes up? And the killers, who and why, are you going to explain or leave it to our imagination?

ralmmfao, i luv that lil barbie zlut pit about how zhe cant open her legz( i fell off my chair!) anywayz, awh poor kai, he cant do anything T_T.........thiz ztrangly remindz me of my grampa, cuz he cant do any of that ztuff either, he cant even make a full real zentace ;.; well thatz alzimerz(sp) for ya!!

This is getting better and better. I love it. Hope Carlton doesn\'t hurt Kai and Ray gets rid of that pink bimbo. Looking forward to the next chapter.

that was short!!!!and han\'t kai passed his stage of being a child to tell someone about carlton!!! i want to fire him so bad and load him up in jail for rape...and several other things just to make his sentence longer! mwahahahahahaha! die carlton!!! DIE!!!!!

Hiya! I\'m so sorry that I haven\'t reviewed for a while but I am now, so be happy! Man, Carlton is so evil! And poor Kai, man he must have the worst luck ever! I hope that you kill off Carlton in the end so that Kai can have his revenge!(Plus I think that it will make most of your readers happy, me included) Good job and you have a very, and I mean very, scary imagination. I am saying this because I find itr very hard to torture my favourite character! How do you do it? Well I still thik that you\'re doing an amazing job with the story, the only thing that I can see is a few spelling/grammar errors. Nothing major. So I hope that you will update again really soon! See ya!

I really love this story and although I admit you need a lot of help with your grammer I like its plot line. It would be great if you could fix up you grammer if you need any help just say so in one of you chapters. Other than that this is an excellant story. I especailly love the fact that you brought back Kai\'s attitude its really a great read when you have a snarky arrogant bastard who is cold hearted but completely irresistable. Anyways keep up the good work and I hope we see a lot more of cold Kai. Oh and by the way if this doesn\'t end up as Kai x Rei I will kill someone. ::SMILES:: Update soon. ::SMILES::