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awwww. how sweet! they get horny quick.....try to update more often cause i check everyday....i\'m surprised damon didn\'t want to watch over kai so ray doesn\'t try anything. till next time choi

oh god this is a great story!keep up the updates! your my second fav on this site next to innocent dance.i love kai.i\'m the kind of obseessed fan that has everything kai okay!kai sounds so innocent and sweet! like a doll....a very fragile porcelline doll but non the less i want to comfort him in a hug! plz update the next chapter! i don\'t think it\'s such a good idea to let kai know about damon and ray liking him....even if they get close i don\'t think they should corupt the innocent mind he has at the moment.i think he might be traumatised trying to decide or even accept those deep feelings.

-parties- YAY!! An update! XD :P....Anyway...It WAS a great chapter...Can\'t wait for the next one..-grins-..But suppose I have to...-sighs- -__-....Heheh ^_^..But it will be worth it!! So untill then!! Ci@o!! ^_^

AWWWWW sweet!!!!!! nice update!!!! omfg your Awesome!!!<3<3 please update soon REI X KAI 4ever!!!!!!XD yatta!!!

you ROCK!

The first one is very easy: (AB)²A²2ABB²

The second one is easier: (AB)(A-b)A²-B²

Today we learn a new one, this isn’t that bad: (AB)³A³3A²B3AB²B³

This looks like factoring... I didn\'t get it at first, but then i noticed it was the product of the squares and cubes and stuff... suppose to be like:

(A + B)^2= A^2 + 2AB + B^2

(A+B)(A-B) = A^2 - B^2

(A+B)^3 = A^3 + 3A^2B + 3AB^2 + B^3

but yeah, they are easy and sorry, I couldn\'t resist... I like math ^_^.

this is really fun ! I love watching Rei and Damon fighting over Kai !

I\'ve been reading this fic, and I think its time for me to GET OFF MY LAZY ASS AND REVIEW. Its so good, you must continue! I understand you have a lot of work (yes teachers are really mean these days) but I guess its the Christmas break now, ne? I\'m not forcing you to continue, I never force people to update. I\'ll wait forever for this fic, its so good. Even if I turn 70 years old and you still haven\'t continued, I\'ll wait. I\'ll wait for this fic. I\'ll wait till I\'m 120 or as long as I live. Well, to make this long review short, I just want to say I love it!

I love the story (altough I dont like the torment of kai but still) But could you try to make it a bit longer. And sometimes a bit more detailed. Like that people get more inside the story and inside the characters mind. Most people know kai as the lone wolf and a strong independent guy. In this story though he is everything he is not in the serie. Shy, scared, uncapable of defending himself, and he shows his emotions freely. Since the picture of him is completly changed its more difficult to really \"understand\" him. But some people like that. I know I dont make much sense but thats my opinion. Anyway cant wait till the next chapter

I BEGGING YA PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS or mainly me BUT PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE I\'M DIYE\'N HERE!!!!!!!!! P.S I though of these tell me if you like.Oh, and and I\'m not saying these to you,so don\'t take them personally ok. Here they are. 1.I\'m smiling because I have no idea whats going on.2.I live in my own little world,but it\'s ok everyone knows mehere.3.Mess with me and you get my horns.4.Stop dreaming about me,I\'m already here.5.Roses are red violets are blue god made me pretty,what happened to you?6.in case you dont know me,I\'m perfect.7.physical attention needed,here\'s my number.8.Keep staring,I might do a trick.9.I\'m trying to see things you\'r way but I can\'t get my head up my but.10.Are we having fun yet?11.People like you are the reason people like me need medication.If you\'r blond no offense ok.12.My blond friend tripped over a cordless phone.13.My blond friend got run over by a parked car.14.My blond friend ran in to an open door.15.My friends call me a disturbance.16.Don\'t kid yourself I was looking at you\'r friend.17.Like what you see dial 1-800-you-wish.18.Shock me say something intellagent.Well that\'s it hope you enjoyed a couple good laughs me and my friend Rebekah thought of these and a bunch of other\'s but these were the most interestingP.S we were inschool when we thought these up,maby these will enspire you to write more.Oh and I almost forgot can you write a G rev beyblade Talax Brooklyn orBrooklynxGarland ormaby even a BrynxGarland I\'d die of happeniess if you did PWEEEEEEAAAAAAASE,with a cherry on top.Well that\'s saying if you know what Beyblade G rev is if you don\'t it\'s the third season of beyblade.OK? Which might I add that I\'m getting the first four DVD\'s of it for christmas and and I\'m about to die if I gotta wait any longer.Well Bye,Bye for now,T.T.F.N,Ta Ta For Now.

Love the new chapter! And yes! I\'m happy that Kai has defend Tala! God I was laughing madly like Tala!