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How cute! enjoyed it. Lmao about Shirley temple. I love bra and vegeta moments

I wish I'd found this story sooner as I don't think there are enough stories on here about Vegeta's fatherhood. This was so spellbindingly cute I can't stop smiling. Wonderful; truly wonderful.

that was so cute dude!!! nice

This has to be one of the most adorable stories I've ever read. I love Bra, she was described perfectly...what a cute little girl. I laughed a lot while Vegeta and Bra watched the movie together. The fact that the violence and strangling of the sheep didn't really bother was just so funny to me. I had to laugh. I also thought that the scene when she walked in on them...well...in their privacy was pretty cute, too. She's so cute, she has no idea whats going on. Yes, a very sweet story. I love it!

This was a GREAT story...very well worded and touching. Good job.

Very, very nice. I got a real kick out of this. Precious is the right word! ^_^

Both your stories, this one and A Father Again, are BEAUTIFULLY written.
I read them both like ten times over just to bask in the easy flow, the wording and the depth.
The whole thing with the movies, Bulma mistaking Shaolin Temple for Shirly Temple was just too cute.
And the ending was just perfect. I loved how all his thoughts sort of tie together in the end and the last
line had me going \"awww\".
\"A Father Again\" totally charmed me. I love Vegeta\'s horror at his \'fetal daughter\' and his musings about
\"the demon progesterone\" and \"the demon communication\", it just fits with Vegeta\'s character, how he would
see everything unfamiliar or uncomfortable in his life as another enemy. I was laughing my head off when
he was like \"Don\'t YOU want to talk??\"
Anyway, I\'m rambling, just wanted to tell you that I thought these were great, and I would love to see
more from you.