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for Table Manners

by CardDragonBall

person Sarkywoman
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...I like. It's taking up the brainpower I would otherwise use to write a decent review.
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, a good table indeed...

that was so great I loved it.

Kakarot flashed him that ‘not-so-innocent’ smile and then looked at the table. “It is an awfully nice table, Vegeta.” ---hehe , oh gosh I loved that. That\'s when I know Vegeta is not going to be able to last...he is going to give into his loevley mate

“I don’t think they’ll want to eat at this table, anyway, Geta,” --me either, but they don\'t have to tell anyone what they did...no one will be the wiser

What about butter?”-- LMAO! :( that would be so gross!

“If you ever plan on getting sex again you will never repeat that sentence.” --rofl!

(Wasn’t it just disgustingly convenient how the table was exactly the right height for Kakarot to fuck him?) ---yeah that is strange, but worked out to everyones advantage...well except the ppl who are going to eat at that table.

That was so great, and very funny!
^.*
-MB-
person Saiyajin-Neko (can\'t be botherd to log in)
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why did Goku pull out? I mean, that makes not sence. Anyway, nice story. ^_^ Fun on the table, seems quite interesting. Ja ne!
person Macha
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bet cha Bulma never asks them to set the table again! hehe. Or maybe she did it on purpose, and she had a camera rigged somewhere. *smirks*

And that had to be ONE HELL OF A sturdy table. Nice PWP.
person jaygoose
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laughs insanely* That was good! As always.

I espcially like these parts: “People are just suppose to eat with their fingers?” he demanded. “I don’t think they’ll want to eat at this table, anyway, Geta,”---that was so cute.

And t “Da “Dammit. What are we going to use for… What about butter?\"... “If you ever plan on getting sex again you will never repeat that sentence.” ---this fic is full of the blinelines. :)

“Wow, Vegeta, did they have boy scouts on Vegeta-sei too?” ---Aww, Kaki, I got it. :)

I loved this so much. You should really write this more often. Gives me inspiration for great one liners.


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