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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic! I enjoy a good fantasy fic with my favorite pairing! So many chapters! It took me a week to finish since I'm only able to read it after school XD
Great job! I'm so happy you kept their sons' real names.
A few typos, but nothing I couldn't read.
Great story and I love Glay and Ranma's works too.
Great job! I'm so happy you kept their sons' real names.
A few typos, but nothing I couldn't read.
Great story and I love Glay and Ranma's works too.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just finished reading your story and I loved it! so many twists and turns, and such a great plot! Smexyness between Tyson and Kai didn't hurt either;)( By the way my FAV pairing:P) I sincerely hope you will continue to write other stories like this one! Many thanks:)
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Summary for the full storry in one review!
Needs only one japamses word
KAWAII!!!!!!!!!
Needs only one japamses word
KAWAII!!!!!!!!!
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok i was expecting at least one of them to be pregnant but not both. that was truly inspired. i loved the story even if it did take forever to get to the true lemons.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS ONE OF MY FAVE FAN FICS! I LOVE IT! It\'s not fair that its finished *sob* you should do an epilogue! hehe
Liah xx
Liah xx
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love this fanfiction!! Its one of my favorite! I just want to mention something i think you forgot to put in here. You know how Dragoon told Tyson to look forward to the next full moon. Something surprising may happen, but you forgot to mention the next full moon. I was really looking forward to that part!!
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After 7 straight hours of reading that resulted in a really stiff back and lack of sleep, I have only one thing to say. I love it! ^_^ You even have Gou and Makoto in there without pairing Kai or Tyson with anyone else. Not to mention that I love MaRe pairings almost as much as Tyka ones.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was awesome! Loved it!!!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAH! Kali I dunno what to say about this... yet another masterpiece from you. I truly hope you continue to use your fabulous talent to write for this wonderful pair from beyblade! ^^ I love your stories and I know so many other people do too!! I just dunno how you do it. Thank you so much for this fic it has been so great to read!!! And wow thanx for the dedication, I love you too!! Always keep writing! I loved it!!!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like ima tellin ya on msn this ending chappie rawks on!!!!! You are one of the few that can actually write a good mpreg fic, ive seen so many bad ones >< Hehehehehehhe the way ya write about Gou and Makoto is so sweeeeeet!!!! Greatest enmding to one of ya greatest fics thusfar!!! :claps and bows: