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The fic are just great as it is... If people want to change it
threathen with not writing more... no scratch that I wouldn't
be able to read more either.^^ You make Hillary sound
differnet and in this story she and Tala are a good match.
Really good writing^^

jesus, you update fast! surprisingly, you update fast, make big but also good chapters. congratulations, you have a big consideration for your reviewers!
you story is going marvelous, and you swing the important roles between your main characters very well so your story doens't seem very kai centrered or tyson centered. on the other hand, they are not the center of the world so the other charaters also have their own important roles in the story :). I'm liking the daily like situations and your descrition of them as well, Tabitha bringging a special touch to it. rather odd her first word is 'Kai', why does she like him that much? *giggles* nasty situation kai and tyson got caught in (and rather humiliatiing by the way...).
one last note: though some aspects of the medieval ways are well described, some are wrong, like the treatement given between tala and kai (being cousins and all, that doesn't mean they would treat each others like that. in the same line of though, it is not very likely having _prince_ tyson helping kids together with max, in fact, most likely they would never have met. but this is your fic and this is AU, so you have all the liberty)

DSK/Mandra: Gah! too lazy to log in.. *huffs* ANYWAYS! I never doubted you dear goddess! Anyways, I love it! *snorts* I'm REALLY sure Takao didn't need those images.. LOL *snorts* Bh whh whats with the tala/hillary and one-sided bryan/tala? It's like.. confusing me.. and the kenny/hillary thing.. SHES A WHORE! *giggles* nah, not really just.. yeah.. Lmao. Anyways, thats about it. I really like this and await the next chapter!

Ja!

~Mandi/DSK

Your story is progressing wonderfully. Unfortunately I am a pain in the ass so I am gonna have to say this Tala/Hilary thing makes my stomach turn. lol Sorry I just can't stand the girl.

I am a major Tala/Bryan fan. Their just so perfect together. *shivers*Tala and Hilary*cough*No.

But seriously, ignore my little whining and continue this awesome story! So other than the Hilary/Tala thing your story is one of my favorite and I have read tons of Beyblade fics. Your detail and imagination is one of the best I have seen. Hope to see more real soon and maybe some new stories after this one is done. :)

ok, so this took a little longer to read then I thought! big story you've got there, but it's well achieved! you let the characters get involved with one and other in time and explored their feelings very well. I think you interpretaKai'Kai's feelings very well. Strange as it might seem, I'm actually liking Hillary (I so hate her in the anime, don't worry, it's not like she's a bg loss to the m eit either...), anyways, and it's interesting to see how she gets along with Tyson and Tala. Humm, pairring them up doesn't look like a bad idea, but what about Brian and kenny then? I liked the song from chapter 5 too, did you made it up or it really exists? I like your style of writting and you space your story very well. You also did a good job with the plot, though somewhat predictable (well, it's not like there are many choices for the bad guys anyway...), you exposed it carefully and let us readers get more and more into the story. The yaoi\lemon was also well achieved and introduceto tto the plot and story and justifyed by the occurences, so it's realiable and realistic (lets face it, most storis published around here are just about taking the anime's characters and let them screw each other!). can't wait till next chapter is up! keep up the good work!

Yer yer, Hiidy! OMFG... You know, the way you put it with the Bryan/Tala friendship.. makes it seem like there was something um.. more. between them... and personally.. I want a Bryan/Tala..>.> And uh.. put hillary with kenny and um.. er.. yer.. *twitches* yes im an idiot. You're one of my goddesses! *worships* Which Is why im just like.. blabbering.. *sobs* sorry.. Um, >.> *shuffles feet* I know your a busy goddess with school, and everything else.. but could you grant me something..? A small tiny *shows a small size with her fingers* ficlet of a Tyson/Tala/Kai? *drops down to the floor and sobs* Im sorry sorry! gomen! Forgive me I shouldn't have asked! *worships humbly* But um.. Yeah, Im a big fan of your work and youre one oi my goddesses.. w00t ^_^;; Um, yeah.. Anyways Thats it.. Good job! Can't wait to see more! Ja! *bounces off happily, squealing about the goddess and her awesome writing*

Cool! Bryan is okay and there with everyone!! Hurry with the next chapter!!

WHOOT!! UPDATE >D!!!!

Awesome, lovely, sad, cool, *enter more words here*, Chapter!!!!!!!!


YAY!!! >D Hurry with teh next update *pokes* :3

~PD

What happened to Tala? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Ohh I relly like you're plottings... That was so good.
Well well jealousy... Oh this is do great you must
have a fun time making these stories up... Keep
up the good work but do rest sometimes so you
don't get tired of writing them cause that would
be a loss... Yay you're so good^^