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That was a great ending!!!

Gohan was hilarious. Goten and Vegeta operating...LOL

And Kakarott watching himself get a cesarian. ROFL

Loved it all.

I havn't forgotten about Presta either. *Grin*

~Webtester01~

Well, I am glad that this was a happy ending and Kakarott and the babies are doing alright. Yeah, probably not the best idea to talk about examining a super sayian if he doesn't seem pleased with the idea.

And they are going home. Of course, we know where that is headed.

I hope you have more ideas up your sleeve. I do understand that you are busy though.

Me neither. i came in like halfway through the Buu saga and i have no clue how old he was!!!! ah well, i'll just minipulate the time for my own ends. *evil chuckle* i can't wait for more!!! more!!! *grabs Trunks and runs off with him*

Red cenly nly had some good advice for Presta.

Was Gohan always on the bottom in regards to him and Caradoc?

Also 'Geta is right; Goten usually is the reason why someone got pregnant. LOL

 

Also I'm working on chapter 15 as I type this review. It seems I'm on a roll this week, despite being sick. :-(

Looking forward to more.

~Webtester01~

Hurray. Things are finally settling back down in a comfortable pace. The usual chaos and drama. The babies are being born. Caradoc and Gohan are banging And I really liked the last thing Red said to Prethouthough. Made me smile.

Well, Kaki not wanting to go through the process does explain it. It was kind of cute the way he wanted to see the first born, but I think he forgot he still had a second one on the way. Going well so far. *crosses fingers*

I like what Red eventually told Presta, "Don't let anyone push you around," and admitting she might be a little prejudice about Gohan being a halfbreed. *shrugs* I hope Presta takes her advice. I also believe that Red had another good point, Gohan must have wanted her if he mated with her after already having a bonded mate. Of course, it could be part of the half-breed thing, and his insticts may have been led astray somewhere along the way. *shrugs again* Seems to be working out though.

I went to look at the shirts. WAY COOL. But I don't wear white. Still thinking about getting the "It's not a Bananna in my pocket," one though. *thinks about all the raised eye brows at work* LMAO, what makes it even funnier, is that it would so totally NOT apply. hehe

It was chapter 13 not 14. and somehow i completely missed it. i went from 12 to 14. i don't know how i did it but i did. lol i'm sorry Card. i'm a bad reviewer. ooh guess what, i bought the History of Trunks dvd now i can watch 17 all i want. i love how sarcastic he is. and my best friend loves 18. hmm...you probably know this. how old was Goten when the whole Buu thing came up? and how old was he when he first went Super Saiyan??? i know Trunks went Super Saiyan first but i need to know how old Goten was.

did i miss something somewhere along the way? i don't remember reading gohan bite presta...or am i just a complete dunce??? please help!!!

It's the twins birthday! *blows whistle*

I am looking forward to more of this wonderful plot.

btw ch 14 in progress.

~Webtester01~

Okay, so I re DON DON"T understand why Kaki wouldn't want to have the babies. I would want them OUT.... NOW. Maybe he knows thee goe going to be a handful when they aren't so nicely contained any more?

As for Presta, yeah, I can imagine her comment did give Red pause. I have forgotten, has Red met Gohan? She might change her oppinions of half breeds if she gets to see the power they can posses. *shrugs*

AAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, T-shirts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cool. hehe, have a catalog in the making?