rate_review Reviews

So, I just spent the last two days reading EVERYTHING connected with this story and I must say I really like what you write, but the whole Vegeta/Kakarot Vegeta/Goten depressed and having bad sex thing kinda sucks. I loved all of the other stories and will continue to read because basically I love your stories, but I hope it gets better soon. Then again it could be that it's 3:22am and I'm grumpy. Ah ha! Hope springs eternal! Gomen, I really do love you. *puppy eyes with quivering lips*

Oh, the sayian threesom was interesting, even if it was from Cardoc's biest point of view. Yeah, I can imagine that the reason there aren't more mulitipul matings is because of possible killings. It's just lucky that Presta seemed okay with it, and Cardoc doesn't have the power to actually kill either one of them for it. hehe, Like the t-shirts.

King Vegeta's POV on the sex thing was cute. Now he gets to go back to the way he likes it, MMmmmmmmmmmm. (Thinking of taking a similar trip down to dirty-thought-ville)

I bet Kaki looked like this O.O when he heard he was going to give a mulitipul birth. Please try to reassure him that only having two is so much easier than having three, especially the first time.

I knew the hockey gear would come in handy. hehe

Again, I like the T-Shirts.

You never replied to my email!!!!! anyway, i loved this chapter and i cant wait to see what happens next. *walks in with Trunks, chatting about something or other and suddenly Trunks is gone. taken by the blur that is goten* well ok i'll talk to you later than. *walks off with 17* i just love him despite him being all evil and everything. i actually caught an episode of GT a couple weeks ago, I think it was like two episodes before 18 kicks his ass. but i was just watching him fight chibi goku and he was ITing and everything and i'm like alright! that fits something i want to put in my new story. :D ok done babbling now. more!

This last chapter was well wri. I . I have a question. Does gohan like carodac (sp?) or presta more. I mean that whole threesome is weird. *starts to laugh hysterically* sorry. I just imagined vegeta in an apron with a rolling pin in his hand yelling at the twins for coming home late. Haha! But really I can't wait until you update. Till' then.

I think the thing that I am MOST happy with in this chapter is that Kaki finally seems to like wha bei being done with/to his body. Sex is so much better when you are having a good time.

Yes, Gatta put it correctly when he discribed what he would do if he found someone with his brother in a similar situation. I am kind of glad lil' Geta didn't act out on his voiced oppinion.

Well, I had no idea that Presta was going to jump Cardoc's bones. NONE. I thought O.O . I was almost ashamed of Gohan until he finally acted out. Sheesh, I don't know any other sayian who would let their mate be fucked infront of them. It does seem like it is going to be an interesting evening for those three.

*gets out popcorn and wears hockey gear incase it gets rough* hehe

Eee gads! It just keeps getting more and more turned around. Does anyone in the fic. feel like things are going somewhere? Well, one of the other twins does.... hehe.... he got laid.

*note to self* Having a banished brother show up through the wonders of IT is NOT condusive to sex.

Poor Kaki, I wonder what it IS going to take to make him prepared to be a mom. Hmmmmm.

That was awfully nice of Gatta, both the body heat, and the title change. I wonder what kind of person it takes to realise that they are not capable of leading ppl. I know a few that are missing that characteristic, badly.

I hope Gatta gets his throne back.

Bye for now, 60 seconces till the timer shuts off computer.

Looking forward to more.

Hello again. I would just like to say that I love this story. It is very well written and has a good plot. I also just finished reading "Much like Suffocating" I believe. And I must say that that was an exionaional story. It was very angsty and dark. And I actually like that chichi. Which is very surprising. To get me to like her is something that has never been done. Also I thought the characters were all great and the group together made a grand team. Now it was all good and well but *shudder* the krillin lemon just about made me run and hide. So *Hands you a trophy* Here is the award for most creative. Also *hands you a check* this is for getting me to like chichi. And I would just like to thank you *takes check back* for donating that to sick kids. Well I've rambled enough. Keep Updating.

I\'ve always had a fondness for Gohan so I\'m glad in one fic he gets a bit of action other than being the annoying one. Really liked the Cardoc/Presta/Gohan thing. It could be very interesting. Loved Goten screaming about seeing his naked daughter. His Mother was most likely smiling for some unknown reason having gotten a little motherly revenge on his son.