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But we can\'t leave reviews at your website. So you need to post here too. I\'m enjoying your fics. I feel sorry for Goku now. How is Goten going to fix (Go (Goten\'s) mess. Woo hoo I was right about the Gh/C/P situation. Keep writing. -El-

I\'m finally posted. It\'s called Swarm Saga and its on MM.org. You sohould read it because I respect your writing and I respect your opinion (even if its not a yaoi)

I read this on your site because aff.net was being an ass, just like Gohan. or maybe not because i got what i asked for didn\'t i? *shrugs* ah well, i like them together. \"Sit down Caradoc\" that was great. I can\'t wait to find out more about Ta and Gatta cause i\'m confused about the bite marks on their shoulders. and suckily enough, i don\'t have net access till the 16th or 18th of August. gahh! *falls over and dies* *trunks shakes her shoulder* i don\'t wanna get up, i don\'t wanna go to school. *wakes up* oh sorry, *turns so card can see a dart in her back* i don\'t think goten likes all the time i\'m spending with trunks by ourselves. *grins at goten* anyway, i can\'t wait to get caught up again when i get back. see ya later! *grabs trunks and runs away*

That was awesome!!!

Wow. Talk about Gohan unleashed! I always wondered what would happen if his Saiyan side was brought out in full force. Hmm. Three layers. Interesting. I would not be surprised if the building was destroyed by the time Caradoc was done! Speaking of Caradoc, I am sure the look on his face was pricesless during the claim. Also I think it\'s the first time Caradoc actually took a liking to someone. We will have to see after cetain events have completed.

Presta sure was in for quite a ride. LOL

Finally someone says it\'s okay to be a perv. Yes...i very much end thd the smuttiness of this chapter. My dream had been realized and now I bask in the glow of their raunchiness. Okay...I really need to lay off the asthma pump...any way...yeah...poor Macha....

Yeah, Oh Shit! What the heck was Gohan thinking? Or is it a matter of instinct rather than any real thought? Ah well, it\'s done. Well, that is of course the twins want to come back and change it. Lucky Presta, Lucky Gohan, Lucky Cardoc ( I am still not spelling his name correctly.) Sounds like fun!

Goten being timid. Well, there\'s a 180 for you. Knowing that you may have made a major mistake can do that though.

Well, I hope everything turns out well for Kaki and the King and the other set of twins. I have to wonder if Goten does fix it, will the third Vegeta remember that he isn\'t the king when he goes back to his dimension?

Did I indicate that this verse having it\'s own set of twins was lame? I didn\'t mean too. I just meant that I thought it had to be something else. Makes perfect since to me. I do, however, find them less than desireable compared to the, well, twins that I am already use to. I guess the term that I would call them after only having met them this once is \'punks\'. (Goten ans cos counter part are devils, and smooth devils at that!)

Nice to see Gohan taking to a verse that has \'no rules\'. I knew he had it in him! Well, battle and blood lust seemed to have led to other sorts of lust, huh? I was a little shocked. Don\'t ask me why, but I thought he was straight, or was that because he was still playing by the \'rules\'.

Well, I guess it\'s going to be an extended visit then isn\'t it? Goten\'s going to have to help out Kakarott. Yay! That just means that there is going to be more to this story.

hey, this is starting to make more sense. (The last chappie confused me somewhat, so I was looking forward to this one) I don\'t think it\'s confusing (now! :) ). Also starting to like Caradoc, as I see more of him. Kickass. (But no original Vegeta (APAM King) (maybe they should be named like soft drinks- original, small, classic!) and Karrarot, however, Gohan getting angry is worth it.)

*pouts and crossed arms over her chest* Dammit! I have attention deficiect disorder or something and a mad memory okay! So you got me that time but next time you better what it...if I remember. Anyway...you didn\'t read the whole thing...so there...I added a...um...warning. *looks sheepish* It would seem that I tramatized poor Macha and I don\'t want to do around doing that to anyone else. Anyway, I won...that is the first time I ever guessed anything right *is proudly waving to imaginary fans*

Okay...about the chapter, it wasn\'t that confusing. I think I got it down. Ta and Gatta are this verse\'s twins and Geta and Goten are still the other verse\'s twins. And what is going on with Gohan and Caradoc...and Presta. I am interested...very interested...I am a p a perv! *pervish grin*

I don\'t know he\'s kicking my ass. maybe because i keep getting distracted by his pretty face. ;D hehehehe ok so...two sets of twins, two differnt dimenstions...goku gonna die? noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and gohan/caradoc action! hehehehe can\'t wait. wonder what\'s gonna happen with Presta though? maybe she\'ll take advice from me and bite gohan herself. :D can\'t wait for more!

Vegeta and Kakarott\'s kids are: Vegeta and Goten! um..at least that is what I think.
*sobs* I have missed so much...please forgive me!!!!
Anyway great stuff! I love this ficcie, it is sooooooooo hilarious.
Poor Goku...had to have the bad sex :( aww I hope it gets better for him...but gosh that was all so funny.
And Presta she is just great in this fic...well everyone is great and I love the characters. how original each one is and all the witty comebacks that they seem to have.
But now I am very interested about the set of twins that has shown up.
^.*
-MB-