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And I was worried I had missed more than that. Whew! There\'s my boy!!!! I even think you managed to work out some of the thought processes. I am so proud of you!!!!! Something tells me Presta wants in on the action as well.
Oh my!!! The political implications!!! you can tell that Vegeta, mof Gof Goku, was way out of practice with the entire political arena thing. Otherwise those boys would have picked up on it the second Ta said he was King (at 16). I think we may have found something else Goten\'s not good at, politics. Then again we already knew that from the way he handled the guy who was Bulma\'s client. Why do I have this strange feeling thahan han took Caradock home with him? Yeah! Keep writing. (sitting on the edge of my seat.)

Presta giving Caradoc ideas. That\'s a laugh. If Caradoc follows through with Presta\'s suggestion, Gohan is in for one heck of a ride. *grin*

As far as guessing who one of the mystery people are, I would say that one of them is a versioin of Trunks.

Keep it up!

I guess that could be aranged! *shakes head and thinks to self* (should have known better)

*covers eyes with hands* Don\'t tell me Goten and lil\' Geta are going to have to have a sex talk with Vegeta and Kakarott. About how to do it with girls. (I know someone has too.) Poor Kakarott.

Well, although I could use the points, I haven\'t got a clue as to who the other twins are. (unless it\'s this verse\'s version of your twins, doesn\'t seem right though)

I am glad that Gohan is going to be able to prove himself capable. I found Cardac\'s take on Presta kind of funny. (blonde haired bitch)

And yes, I am very happy that sayiaman doesn\'t exsist here. This is good. *nods head*

I found Gohan dragging Cardac off in the after coments funny. hehe

There can\'t be TWO sets of the annoying...ly adorable *grins at a glaring Goten* twins can there? if there is...holy fuck. i can\'t wait to see the explination for that one. :D trunks and i will calmly play cards while we try and figure out what insanity the twins have caused this time. :D

Ahey hey the King and Kakarot\'s kids? I am so lame when it comes to guessing.


Oh you don\'t know what I\'m talking about do you...hmm...*grins evilly* I guess I\'ll just have to hold on to the Raditz and Cell chapter until you figure it out. Heh Heh...

Hey! Come back here! *runs after her to get answers, slows, falls over and dies. Trunks shows up, pokes her in the eye and look, she\'s awake!* hehehehehehe i\'m tired and excited because i got to read this and now i\'m tired again. hmm...you\'re not telling about gohan and caradoc...now i have to know!!!

AND WHO THE HELL IS THAT MYSTERIOUS GUY!!!!! more! *puppy dog eyes*

*Card starts breathing agian.* \"Finally!\" *blushes* I am NEVER doing that again. I want to know what sayian you want me to call on to recesitate you the next time you decide to fall over dead. (seriously) And with the work load you have, I expect that you are going to need it (talking about putting up your site, Yay!)

I found a LOT of humor in this chapter. LOL green and pink Vegeta rabbit, and twin squirles, and pudding. I wonder if Kakarott would have complained so much if it was chocolate pudding. Hmmmm? *thinks about the possiblities*

Ah, more curious interaction between Cordac (I don\'t think I spelled that right) and Gohan. Gohan and Naked ppl. LOL, interesting phylosophy (once agian, spelling is bad). I wonder when Gohan is going to have to prove he is capable of defending himself, if he wants.

Oh, Presta, *shakes head* you wish for life to be exciting. Be careful what you ask for dear.

Gohan subconsiously licking his lips in that compromising position? LOL I really laughed when Presta showed up. That had to be a Kodak moment. Gohan won\'t necessarilly be angry at his brothers if Caradoc gets Gohan to... Anyway Presta\'s \'don\'t mind me\' attude was funny.

I wonder what the twins messed up this time. Looking forward to finding out. Keep up the talented writing!

So this was your revenge right? Who the hell is the tall kid. I want to know! And the Caradoc/Gohan thing is so hilarious. I can\'t wait!

Kaki drank the hormone therapy. *grins*

Presta is so protective of Gohan. -Nice

I wonder what Caradoc is up to in regards to Gohan. *smirks*

More please!