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for A King With Chaos

by CardDragonBall

person jaygoose
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...Gohan is asking for it isn\'t he? And if Presta is so worried about Gohan than she should be there, instead of running around stinking up a storm.
person Macha
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*quirks an eye brow* I am really not certain what to think of the interaction between Gohan and Cardoc. I am somewhat surprised that Cardoc isn\'t trying to jump his bones, but *shrugs*.....

Those twins have horrible since of timing. I am surprised that lil\' Geta didn\'t faint when they found them in that position. Just because they aren\'t really his parents maybe?

Hehe, drink Kakarott. Drink it up!

Hmmmm, Presta, what\'s she thinking?
person EleneK
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And yet there is still that pesky deadline. Do the twins know about that? Gohan/Caradoc? Still undecided about that yet. Should be interesting though. Does Gohan really need Presta to protect him (he does train with Goku, Vegeta, Piccolo, and his brothers) or does Presta just not have confidence in his abilities to protect himself? Or is she speaking of Emotional pain instead of physical pain?
person Lenora
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So i sense a Caradoc/Gohan pairing coming up??? it would be intresting and even extremely funny. i can\'t wait for the next chapter. more!!!!
person Lenora
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*pout* i\'m really disliking aff.net lately. it\'s being mean. but keep going card, while i sit and play speed with Trunks. psst...presta gave me the key before she left so goten would be able to go along. so trunks and i have come to an understanding, he\'ll sit and play cards with me mon-thurs and he can go home on the weekends. :D aren\'t i so nice. heehehe keep going!!!
person Webtester01
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Another wonderful chapter.


I could be wrong, but there seems to be some chemistry between Caradoc and Gohan.

person Elenek
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is Caradock a good guy or a bad guy? What did he mean by a price? How\'s he gonna handle Gohan being able to handle his own in a fight? Especially since Gohan does have a special trick. YOU\'RE giving Gohan a personality? *falls out of chair and dies* I guess one of our favorite boys is having twins. And even if he\'s not, I guess that means that Caradock is the back up plan? *shudder* Poor Duke, you need to give the bakayaro a name. -El-
person Lenora
schedule July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ya know, i was thinking that it would be extremly funny if Presta bit Gohan. Make him the submissive partner in the relationship. but then i was thinking that Presta and Caradoc would be intresting. anyway, loved the first chapter. cant wait for more.
person Macha
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, another story! Woot!

Well, this one has hardly started. I am going to be very interested in what Cardoc\'s place in the whole thing is. I would have to agree with him though, having your kneecap removed isn\'t conducive to sex.

Now, Vegeta and the royal septer. Hmm, I thought for a moment that Kaki was going to be sucking on it. Of course, the way Vegeta was discribing the whole incident(and it was a very detailed discription) and what he was going to do about it I don\'t think he wanted to be in that kind of prementment with whom ever he was cussing about.

person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the title. ^_^

I kinda like Kakarott among Kings too.

*gasp* Why did they throw Caradoc (love that name) out..let him fend for his self like that?
I love this ficcie so far. I do wonder what is going to happen with the whole heir thing.
And are Geta and Goten going to try and power up Caradoc?
So many quest tha that will be answered sooner or later.
And nice semi lemon too. ^_~
^.*
-MB-

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