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for A King With Chaos

by CardDragonBall

person Ginia
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Off to a NICE start with this one - and my favorite flavor too!
person EleneK
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tleftleft Gohan with Caradock? No \"Gohan, come meet Grandpa.\" Instead, theaveeave Gohan with the asshole who hates Vegeta and probably Kakarrot as well. I\'m thinking that was not the wisest decision that Goten and Vegeta ever made. And Caradock decides that he wants to talk to Gohan right off the bat without even knowing who these people are? What does he want to talk about? I have a couple of ideas but I\'ll wait to see if they\'re right. Something tells me that Gohan is not going to like the conversation and I\'m looking forward to Caradock finding out that Gohan can fight and has been involved in a serious one more than once. I\'m also looking forward to Gohan loosing some of his prissiness and getting even more in touch with his saiyan side. Should be ebtertaining.

Do people want to kill Goku becaus is is keeping Vegeta from producing children or as a way of getting to Vegeta (Kings have enemies) What did this duke do to poff off Vegeta so badly?

person angry monkey
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Sweet title.
I see Caradoc is going to be in this more then. Will the twins see Vegeta and Kakarot soon? (Another episode of the side effect psycodelic-ness of the hormone therapy!?)
person Webtester01
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM

It was one thing to prove a point, it was another to drive it home by leaving him in this world that stank like sweat and sex and was filled to the brim with dirty leering (larger) Saiyans. -LOL Cardoc got what he deserved.


Mocked him now, for the past eight years, called him “his highness Caradoc” but they stopped thinking they could use him as a punching bag. Kept theirtanctance because a day didn’t pass when he didn’t have his trusty knives with him. Bardock told him not to cut off any more kneecaps, but he could do whatever else was necessary to protect himself. Cutting off kneecaps? *shudders* He is ruthless.


Twins, a Super Saiyan and something else that was taking in the sight of the camp like he had never seen anything quite as unreal. A priss, how unusual. -*snickers* Looks like Cardoc is getting ideas... Watch out Gohan.


“This is my friend, Presta,” pointed at the female Super Saiyan that was stinking like a ‘come and fuck me’ sign. Moving like someone had already done the job, but she hadn’t taken to it. -LOL Oh, PresI thI thought the \'come and ...\' sign was funny. Hmm. I guess someone did a good job.


Which left him with the twins and the priss-boy who was running his hands through his hair and wagging his tail behind him in nervous swishes. He smelled odd. It was hard to tell, anymore, but the kid could have been a half-breed. -*chuckles* I can just picture Gohan\'s behaviour.


He watched them walk up to Bardock and shake his hand and all of them were invited back into the tent where the Super Saiyan girl glowed like a lightbulb and illuminated it from the inside out. LOL lighbulb. Loved that.H

He looked at the half-breed he was left with and shook his head. “Come on. We can talk in my tent.”

“Your tent?” it squeaked at him. Gonan squeaking> *dies laughing*


Then he walked away from him, and left the kid to figure out if he wanted to follow or not. By the looks of him with his pretty smooth skin and swishy nervous tail, he hadn’t been in a decent fight in his life. Immediate punching-bag pick for the camp. -Hmm. Pretty??? *narrows eyes at Cardoc* Punching bag you say? Maybe it will be a good learning experience for him. Then again. *sighs*


Keep it up.

person jaygoose
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...I\'m not entirely sure yet...but I make just like Caradoc. (that\'s spelled right, right?)

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