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December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
uuuummmmm. where's chapter 11?
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You cant leave me hangin. Update this, im loving it.
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've never really read any DBZ fanfics before. The few I have never really interested me. This however, has peaked my interest, and is done very nicely. Good work!
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August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn... cant wait for ya to update! on tha edge of my seat here. its fuckin awesome.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good chapter update soon
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fanfic can\'t wait to read the next chapter. update soon
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you decide to write some more chapters. I think this fanfic is going to turn out to be a awesome fanfic. Please write soon
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far so good can\'t wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work. update soon
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot. It\'s a refreshing change to see that Bra\'s not spoiled little daddy\'s girl in this fic. Please update soon.
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