rate_review Reviews

This is a spectacular story!!! You've done a great job!! And I feel that you've pretty much stayed true to the characters!!! This is definitely a favorite. Goku X Vegeta fic!! Keep up the great work!!! :]

WoW I really love this fic. I will read the sequeal because I want to know what happen next XD and because you write good. ^_^

I'm not mostly into Yaoi sotries, especially DBZ feat. Goku/Vegeta...but i I loved this one! I laughed most of the arguments and all. Great fic. Is the kind of story that I like to read, evenif it is Yaoi. The best of all is that you don't concentrate all your story into the sex scenes.

Finally! Finally I had a bit of time free and decided to come back to DBZ fandom to re-read this story and finally read the last three chapters I had left behind when FF.net deleted it. I\'m really glad with the way you conducted the story; everyone IC even Goku (at least in my personal view of his character) with all those inner conflicts and Vegeta, a bit too emotional, but I can see him reacting that way given the circustances; the kind of au-ish plotline is very believable (I have a weak spot for IC and well developed plots, but oh well... I think everyone with at least a bit of critical eye has it) and last, but not least, you didn\'t rush things between our beloved saiya-jins. Very nice the scene where Goku decided to take the lead of things and the succession of events that followed the act until the very end. I think you captured the feelings very well. Great fic indeed!

I\'m sorry I took so long to get back to reading and reviewing, but I think I had told you in my reviews at ff.net about my gradual abandonement of DBZ fandom, so I think I\'m forgiven. Thanks a lot for your offer to send me the last three chapters back there when I left my previous review here in this site, but as I had moved back to YYH and SaintSeiya fandoms my infatuation with Kuwabara and Andromeda/Hades/Shun stories got back full force I hardly came back here. Sorry I left you hanging. ^_^

Once again congratulations for the fic, aside from little grammar mistakes (that I can\'t really judge since I\'m not that good in english grammar myself) and the annoying \"the drt brt before him\" and \"ta cta complied\" entirelly blamed on aff.net (I don\'t know why these mistakes happened, but your story wasn\'t the only one affected) I have nothing bad to say about it. In fact I\'ll make sure to read the other fics you\'re writing as soon as possible, specially \"Deep Circle\" which I already read the first chapter and the enviroment reminds me so much of a fic that I loved to the heart called \"In lar\'anth(sp?): Through darkest destiny\".

Ok, this review is oh so very long and you might be tired of reading it.
See you later,
Kitkat

That was a cute story, at least i thought so. Too bad it had to end. They\'re so cute. I hope you have other stories that are just as good. I think i\'ll go find out. Keep up the good work. ^_^

I really enjoyed that. Goku has an excellent voice in this. The contrast between his angst over Vegeta\'s well-being and things like \"He ate my cake!\" was great. Also Vegeta on top = yay!

A very good story. Nice lemon and perfect ending.

cdk

This story is so great so far. Great writing.

cdk

Puuuuurrrr... Lemon was a little short, but well-written. I'm definatly checking out the sequel. Hmmhmm. Very good story.

I love this story! and i stayed up later than i was supposed to reading it. reading fanfiction until 2:30am is not the best thing to do when you have to work tomorrow. anyway enough with my blabbing. I love the slight angst of this fic. I seem to remember you mentioning someing about a sequel to this fic. I hope it comes out soon i can't wait to read and keep up the good work.

Sincerly, well not really but maybe,
Killa
a.k.a. marik