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for To Hell Together

by chayron

person Kali
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Come on, update! I know you've got the chapters, for I also go on the evilness that is FF.net!
I need more of the G/V goodness...
person ST
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Come on you know you want to hurry up and update! please my m8s totally freaking over this story.... i\'m starting to think that he maybe gay the idae of goku taking vegeta just seems to excite him too much O.o
So please hurry up and update (no pressure) coz if you dont do it soon i might be in jail for murdering my beate!ate!
^_^
person Sassy
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im Lovin Tha Story Good Work And Write More Of All This Good Stuff!
~Sassy~
person Pixelgoddess
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Goku inhaled several times before speaking. “He’s a mule-headed, uncivilized, rude insensitive, aggressive, hot-headed son of a bitch!” he enumerated, looking squarely at Vegeta.

“Yeah, that I know… But what did he do?” Piccolo watched the very amused prince.

Loved it - loved it. Squabbling Saiyans, perverted Piccolo... Is it possible for something to be angsty and fun at the same time? Amazing that Goku has that much of a vocabulary.

Have this mental image of Goku sniffing a sleeping Vegeta\'s crotch - Vegeta wakes up - \"While you are down there, why not make yourself useful?\" Bwahaha.

Yes, I havst ist it.
person NuTHOusE
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOhhhh we have male bonding
These 2 have a lot of shit to deal with don\'t they?
Bless \'em.
Another great chapter
MORE MORE MORE *giggle*
Plez and thank u!!
person Pixelgoddess
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah - another FF victim. I don\'t know how I managed to miss this story there. I like the description of the Oozaru dreams - I wonder how Vegeta would respond if he was told about them, but I suspect he would brush it off as a Saiyan thing. It is nice to see a thinking Goku, actually troubled by past choices. I am looking forward to more of this well-written story.
person NuTHOusE
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!!!
It made me wanna cry. Poor Geta.
MORE MORE MORE write lots MORE
PLEZ AND THANK U!!
person hailie
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Please update soon!
person Sabi-san
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you decided to post here. The format looks better anyway. *glares at fanfiction.net* Bastards...

Anyway, you\'ve got five stars! Cool beans! *snicker*

As before, a good story, with or without the lemon. But the lemon makes it yummy! ^^
person kitkat
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i can\'t believe it!!! they deleted it from ff.net?
awwww, i\'ll have to wait a lot to read the last two chapters. *sigh*
anyway, i have to say thanks for your comments about the last review i left there. thanks a lot.

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