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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHH! This thinh cut my revie short. And I put soooo much thought on my last review. ~_~

*nods heads* Yes, Lady S explained it to me and all I can say is keep reading. All kinds of good twists and turns coming. This fic gets better and better! I can\'t wait for the moment when Wufei and Heero realize the truth, man the sparks should fly then.


Keep going!!!!!!!
LadyMidnight

Huh??? I can\'t follow the last two chapters, Somehow they are not in harmony with the first 6 ones. Something doesn\'t msenssense.
I also can\'t understand Wufei\'s behaviour at chapter 8 as well as Q\'s reaction to Trow\'s anger. after all he\'s the prince! (and not Trow\'s lover yet!!!)

Absolutely AWESOME!! This is a fantastic fic you have going, I can\'t wait to see what comes next. So PLEASE update soon.
And you were right Duo was HOT in that last scene >:)

I am confused :-/ Waht was with wufie Possesivness with duo, i thought he was going to be with relena, Either way it is a good chap. Please continue and maybe i will get it latter on. Ohwell just keep writing

*lets out a scream* You dedicated the chapter to me? *blinks* Thank you, it was even better then the original!!!!! I truly love the way you described the wicked trio. *melts into a happyi gii girl puddle* I love Quatre in all his forms but the way you portrayed him in the club scene is by far the sexiest I have ever pictured him. \'like a cross between a Hell’s Angel and a submissive bondage teen\' That description is the best...I love that line!!!!!!! This is turning into a great story and I think even Christine Feehan would agree.

Keep up the wonderful work!!!!!!
LadyMidnight

woo-hoo...wicked trio!! Does this mean the dance club scene from the original will come in to play? Thats my favorite scene....love the way you described Duo and Quatre. Be interesting to see what you do with Relena...lol Love this fic and can\'t wait for more!!!!


LadyMidnight

I really like what you are doing with this new version of Dark Deceptions, but there is one thing that puzzles me. How are you going to explain the fact that Heero, Trowa and Wufei didn\'t instantly recognise their lifemates? That is the part of the story that is throwing me off. Having read ahe \he \"Dark\" series, the one thing that always comes thru loud and clear is the unshakable fact that the moment a Carpathian male comes in contact with his lifemate, color and emotion are restored to him, and he can do nothing less then claim his lifemate.

This revision is good and the character development is great, but as far as the lifemates go, the original worked better.



LadyMidnight

Great story! I love The Dark series too. I\'ve read every book including the newest one that came out this month. It\'s really cool that I can now read a fanfic on my fav anime series and book series, and its got 1x2 as well. I really do love this story so far and hope to read more soon! =D

Alright, ve rve read the original and I have to honestly say, I really like this one better. The flow is much more pleasing and there is more explanation of what happened. At least I get the story way much easier than I did the first one, not that I didn\'t like the first one as well. But I don\'t know anything about Carpathians and so on and this revised oneuceduced the need for any knowledge.

Now, next question, when will yodatedate? ^_^